Story -
Poetry to a melody "BURN"
Too many times we hit the end, we burn all bridges and we kill our friends
It's become the vision that holds truth
The dream that never comes
The stars are lovers that all must burn
If they were mine to choose, I'd have reason to look up
But little control we all poses
If black is my light, have no cause to fear night
Comments
I agree with wolfy on this one grand lyrics, acoustic cover would definitely justify that amazing rustic voice you possess, i feel the style you created storms over the natural beauty, well done again, but definitely mix it up great write, great voice amplitude v gratitude xoxo nardine xx
Thanks guys! I'm messing with the garage band app trying to get melody ideas for my lyrics. This one will most likely be a simple acrostic but I went outside of the box on this one.
I took your advise in my new submission. http://cosmofunnel.com/stories/strife-and-pain-48168
let me know what you think? Thanks
"Strife and pain"