POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Chantal Emmenis Poem " My lover "

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- POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes
- on  Chantal Emmenis  Poem
- " My lover  "
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- My lover
- By
- Poetess Chantal Emmenis
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A glance from you reveals your heart’s desire
This moment in time I become your musical lyre
Your eyes on me, you stop to stare
You lock your fingers within my hair
( The poem is having good ending rhymes, I love it. Poetess Chantal Emmenis has depicted the clear picture of human desires in an open style; the ending line of the first stanza is excellent )
Your fingers tease, they touch, they play
In your hands I’m docile, I become your clay
Your lips caress, our breaths collide
Our hearts beat fast, a rising tide
( Highly sensual and beautiful lines, though the second stanza reveal that the physical act of sex is to be enjoyed, this  also seem to suggest that people exercise moderation in doing so )
Your hands they move, they shape they mold
They form our story, our lives untold
A script we write with bodies bare
Our skins now touch, our passion’s flair
(Obviously each and every person may have a different genetic capacity for sex – some more some less. The point is how do we know that in any moment if we are indulging in love pleasures based on the legitimate need of the body or just giving in to the craving of the mind.)
In rhyme we move, we flow, we ache
In flesh we chime, no rules at stake
Free from edict, from prejudice prior
Free to indulge our sexual desire
( No other emotion or sensing has the power to inject the amount of courage, fearlessness, imagination, impetus, motivation and creativity that the force of sexual energy has. This is one of the reasons why sex is the most sought after activity by humans and why sex is the major topic of discussion in all spiritual and religious literature's)
We pace ourselves, we moan, we swelter
Our shadows now our only shelter
Our breaths now hard, our bodies shudder
Our souls are one, you are my lover.
( Normally, we should be able to carry the sexual energy before we are able to channel properly or in a pleasurably way. This more vital than any other sensing powers among humans )
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The intensity of love energy cannot be matched with any emotion known to humans. The force instigated by blissful energy can override even the most intense fears in a human; there is enough evidence to suggest that humans can undertake some extremely risky behaviors under the influence of this energy, which they would not dream of doing if they were not taken up by it. In fact, over indulgence in sexual activities is usually an unbalanced behavior found in humans who fail to develop the conscious channeling of this energy into their creative expression, personal power and well-being.
Dear Poetess Chantal Emmnies, please accept my congratulations for sharing such a sensual poem to us, keep posting more sensual love poems, May God bless your golden pen,
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting. Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me
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Dear Williams,Â
I love the idea of appreciation of the artiste;
you've arranged this eloquently and thoughtfullyÂ
This brings good feelings to the poet and the poem
is gently dissected with care and honesty,Â
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Cudos all round, enjoyed!!Â
Best wishes Jai :)Â
Dear Poet Jai Masters,
Thanks, I wish to encourage all to write more and more poems, keep on writing, I shall pick one of your poems to include in my POETS' PEN too.
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
That would be an honour for me
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If you can make sense of my poem I amÂ
Sending you a prize:)! My poem IÂ
Suggest are ..... I leave up to you whileÂ
I wait. By the way my cat says that poetsÂ
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