POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Cherie Sumners poem " Burning Up the Bed Sheets "

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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Cherie Sumner's poem "Burning Up the Bed Sheets"
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- Burning Up the Bed Sheets
- By Poetess Cherie Sumner
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It is not right, it is not fair
Alone at night, in bed despaired
How I long for caressing touch
His hands on me would mean so much
(Love expresses itself by our actions and deeds, and also by words. Never leave your better half or lover alone at night, And before sleep embraces, be playful, joyful, be submissive both by body and soul. Poetess Cherie Sumner's first four lines are true and fair in its poetic expressions)
I toss and turn with aching yearn
Need love inside to be returned
We should be burning up the bed sheets
With passionate love that repeats
(Many times we try to express our love in ways that we would like others to show us their love. Men and women often need different ways of expression of  love. Poetess Cherie Sumner depicts this theme in its realistic way, Congrats)
Want to feel his breath on my skin
The thrust of him again and again
This angel’s wings are open wide
Begging for him to come inside
(Show affection. Men, as well as women, like expressions of affection. A hug or a literal pat on the back is a way of showing love. Give your mate a back rub or a foot massage, a light kiss, a smooth embrace are all ways of expression of bodily love)
He is more than just temptation
I sense a spiritual sensation
I feel him across aching miles
Taunting me with sensual wiles
(There are many ways to express love. word is one of them, but word can lie sometimes, so this is not the best and reliable. through any physical activities, we can see some emotions behind them. but be careful about dishonest behaviors)
His heart’s desire could have its fill
Just try to keep my body still!
The loving gaze within my eyes
Should swiftly serve to hypnotize
(There is no word that can actually modify love. Love is expressed through natural feelings that we have for something or someone. If love is expressed in its purest form with no conditions, then it is best expressed)
The wait is more than I can stand!
I need some loving from this man!
Hold me, kiss me, make love complete!
We should be burning up the bed sheets!
(As humans know how to speak the words are now necessary to express love. But love doesn't need words as love itself expresses through all you to the other , other than words)
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We need to express our love. Unless something is expressed there is no meaning of its existence. If something like love exists then it must be visible in one or the other way. One of the very important side effects of Love is CARING. It is very important to show the plenty of care if you are really in Love. Real love doesn't need big words. The thing is that you should feel your love, when you start feeling love you will be starting to express your heart before your loved one. You can even pour your heart before her or him without big words.
Expressing love means not with words. But with actions and showing care. Yes, we need words to express the love. Every minute care for your love one, make them think that how much your are caring for your love ones. Show the love truly..And be truly, never make a mistake and if it's your love one mistake also, be calm and forgive your loved one. Good understanding between the two lead to good love between the two. The act of love is communication of love. Speaking it is only one way to say it. The man who quietly stands between you and an attacker has spoken love to you. The woman who smiles when you have said something outrageously idiotic has spoken love to you. The child who laughs at your old joke that they heard years ago has spoken love to you.
How good are you at hearing love? How many times have people spoken love to you without ever uttering a single syllable?
If words are the best way to express love, than many which I love do not know it. If I have the person in my sight, reachable, touchable, then I grab them for a hug. So many of us don’t believe in expressing love in words, we believe our actions and gestures of care and kindness show it ….and that is enough, why should we take the help of words then? But there are times when your words do matter and matter a real lot….Love needs expression always, be it a hug by your three year old daughter or an unexpected kiss from your one and a half year old child…love whenever expressed; add spark in your life.., it fills your heart with zest and zeal and gives you the spirit to live not just exist.
How many times have you told your parents that you love them and are thankful of every little thing that they did for you? how many times have you told your child that he is the light of your life, the greatest of all the blessing God has given you? Did you take out some time to tell your siblings that because of them your childhood picture is so colorful? In the early days of marriage you did tell your spouse you love him but do you do the same after a year of your marriage or after 15 or 25 years? Probably not, the general formula is she knows I love her, he knows I love him….. Just lie down and think…..We all want to be told that we are loved…whenever love is expressed to us by a friend, or sibling, or parent or life partner we feel enlightened, we enjoy that moment for days may be years …but we hesitate to take out some time and let others know about the love we carry for them in our hearts..Why?
No matter how old your love is, no matter how many times it has been expressed Love needs expression always…every now and then…with words and cute acts…so let all the loved ones know how much you love them and add some life to their living.
Please accept my congratulations for sharing your marvelous verse to COSMO viewers; this is a lovely verse, Good luck and happy writing to dear Poetess of love at COSMO, Cherie Sumner
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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting. Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me
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My dear Poetess Cherie Sumner,
Poetry Appreciation is something which doesn't have to mean that you like it. Appreciating something also means noticing or recognizing something. So poetry admiration or appreciation is really all about just that, recognizing and noticing things about poems.
There are no rules to this game. Poetry isn't any one thing; there are many ways to write it, and many ways to read it. Poetry is simply Things You Can Do With Words - and there are lots of things that you can do with words.
Poems are written to convey, communicate and transform impressions and feelings. Poems can make you feel sad, angry, and calm, amused, inspired, reassured or even make you feel numb. Also, most poems are written to be at least a bit mysterious, so if some do leave you a bit confused it's probably half the point! Just tell your reader or listener what your impressions are, and where in the poem you got them. You might find words to do with color, or sound or sense.
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Dear Author Mimi Mata,
Many thanks for your appreciation
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI