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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Cherie Sumner's poem " The Magic Man Meets His Match"

POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Cherie Sumner's poem " The Magic Man Meets His Match"

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 POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on poem " The Magic Man Meets His Match, posted on 11th September 2014

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  • The Magic Man Meets His Match
  • By Poetess Cherie Sumner)

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During the day, he was known as the magic man
Entertaining awe-struck minds with sleight of hand
A magician by trade, his illusions were praised
Across the world his delusions left all amazed

(This seems to be like a  story narrated through a poem, the beginning is excellent in its craftiness and depiction. Love is called as the highest and most powerful form of expansion and exposure of a soul mate)

At night, after shows, he performed another lie
The tricks for the public, in his bed still applied
Women craved his unique hypnotic suspension
His ‘hocus pocus’ in the sheets held their attention

(Both men and women become depressed when they feel they know exactly what to expect out of the rest of their lives. It's certainly important to maintain who you are. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Whatever attracted him to you, be sure to maintain it. It is well-documented that men appreciate women who are beautiful, cute, and/or sexy in their eyes. If you disregard this fact, don't expect your man to view you as the "most beautiful woman in the world)

Though his magical techniques drove the ladies wild
After he seduced them, his interest fell mild
Nightly, he gave the same old magic bedroom show
And his libido waned to no more ebb and flow

(Every man has that magic button that, when pushed, gets the counter-part instantly in the mood for love times. Have The Right Words: Tell her she is more beautiful. Or Tell her she is  amazing)

Until things were shook up by a lady in red
She brought her own magic to pulse inside his bed
Unlike the others, she saw through his magician’s ruse 
With her own playful inspiring tricks, he was amused

(Thinking men are all about sex. Giving it out early and often will not necessarily keep a man. Hint: How soon first sex happens, in and of itself, has little to do with how long a relationship lasts. Focused on physical appearance. Being cute is not enough to land a well-rounded guy forever. If you get a guy to commit to you based on looks alone, stay tuned for a miserable life together.)

She offered him pleasures that drove him insane
Her little ‘abracadabra’ messed with his brain
Any move he tried on her was equally matched
Every trick in his book she mastered from scratch

(While bodily pleasure or attraction is not the only thing in a love relationship, it is important. Show that you're interested in love romantically. Try not to be too prudish and withdrawn. Allow that aspect of the relationship to be free, fun, and lively. Men who want to marry aren't looking for just a room-mate.)

Finally, in frenzied passion he could never hide
He thrust his magic wand of flesh in her deep inside
She moaned from its penetrating disappearing act
His hard magic stirred inside her with strong impact

(Sometimes when you’ve been in a relationship for a long time, the anticipation of seeing each other goes away. Try to cultivate a non-stop involvement, both mentally as well as physically)

And they both fell into a spell of love’s romance
This was no one night stand’s shallow circumstance
A new magic was created in the magic man
No deception for him to master or understand  

(The magic of love is our ignorance that it can never end or close. Whether you are a magician by trade, or business personnel by profession, be natural when you dream women in your mind.  For all the glamour elements out there, the fake things, hair dyes, and all the rest, a man really appreciates something that is genuine. Be natural and don't pose. You want him to get to know the real you because it is the real you he's going to have to live with when you're loved or wedded in life)

The chemistry between them grew even hotter
When he found out she was a magician’s daughter
She knew all the illusions and tricks of the trade
The magic man met his match when he got laid

(Show confidence always in love magic.  Be sure of yourself, and ready to tackle whatever is before you. Many men love confident women. How can a man not feel privileged when he earns the esteem of a woman who values herself so highly?. Hence, it is true to say that life is magic, love too.)

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 Poetess Cherie Sumner beautifully narrates a story of a magician by trade; Love magic is the effort to bind the passions of another, or to capture them as a pleasure  object through magical means rather than through direct activity. It can be implemented in a variety of ways, such as a beautiful girl appearing and disappearing, or different magical rituals. Love magic has been a subject in the practice of magic, and in literature and art, for many centuries

Love does not consist in gazing at each other but in keeping a low profile with the same wave lengths and looking ahead together in the same direction. . Be open. Be honest. Always communicate. Be positive, fearless, and enjoy your life! If you think you need him to make life more fulfilling, then you need to focus on you for a while and learn how to be whole without him. A man won't fill any void. Visualize being the woman whom a man remembers fondly. Capitalize on your positive unique qualities, talents, or interests.

Dear Poetess Cherie Sumner, Please accept my congratulations for sharing the above verse with our COSMO viewers. Wish you good luck in your future writings.

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting.  Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me

– WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Dear Poetess Cherie Sumner,

I am fully aware about the inner story and I have followed the internal meanings, but when subjects like this comes in, I am bit scared to comment differently, I just give a feather touch on the overall poetic elements and its implications, to avoid more criticism,

And my column is just a personal appreciation column, not a pure literary outlook, though I have certain criteria for the same, If I post negative comments, sure the authors will never like it, My motive is just to encourage all authors,

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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