POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Chinda Gudenproppa " Breaking Free "

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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Chinda Gudenproppa  " BREAKING FREE"   posted on 20th June

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BREAKING FREE

Chinda Gudenproppa

For so many years

I have tried my best

You just treat me badly

Like a dog you detest

I gave you healthy children

The heirs to your throne

Your reward for this

Was to break my bones

I know you wanted boys

God doesn't allow us choice

I prayed so many times

Yet he didn't hear my voice

I'm not allowed friends

I rarely ever go out

If I do, you chastise me

I get frightened when you shout

I never wanted to marry you

My family made it so

You're cruelty disgusts me

That's why i must go

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Welcome to COSMO SITE, dear Poetess. Thanks for sharing and posting your wonderful verse based of family issues.  This is the first verse from Chinda Gudenproppa's Pen.

Marriage life requires kindness and consideration, the moment you stop working on your marriage is the moment it begins to fail.Maintaining a healthy marriage requires sacrifices, attention and care. It helps to think of your marriage as a living thing in itself. Like all living things, it needs nourishment and shelter, healing when it is sick, and space to grow and flourish.These are all pleasant words, but what does that mean on a practical level? It means you need to always think about your marriage and life after marriage which is very important and not take it for granted. It means you need to be cautious against things that might terrorize it, not just the obvious things like temptation, but the delicate things like imbalances in responsibility and duty, comparisons to others, jealousy and so on. It means you need to nourish your marriage with thoughtfulness for the other’s needs, find time together and sometimes even time apart. It means when things are going wrong you need to stop and think about how you can improve them and perhaps what sacrifices you need to make. It means that a marriage needs to go forward, to change as you both change and to grow stronger. Welcome to COSMO with your first poem with a family theme. Congrats dear Poetess Chinda Gudenproppa for sharing your wonderful poem with us. Pour more and more verses. God bless

BY

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting.  Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me

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