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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Laura Wighton's poem " Lust "

POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Laura Wighton's poem " Lust "

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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes  on Laura Wighton's poem " Lust "

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Lust

By Laura Wighton

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Lust comes and lust goes

It's as easy as taking off your clothes

One minute your mesmerised, the next your're ignored

You may aswell lay your heart down on the chopping board

(A love is based more on physical behavior. It is based on strong feelings toward another. It haunts us throughout our lives and can lead to our destruction or transformation)

But, the chemical tension arises so quick

And you can't seem to keep your eyes off his d!**,

The charm in his words makes you feel weak

And how could you ignore the man's physique!

(A lust is based more on "self-benefit", of what can benefit you rather than the other person. This is "I love you because it feels good, and makes me happy loving you. This is very negative)

The ego takes over and it feels so right,

Until the next morning you wake in a fright

So nieve, so daft to think this man wanted your heart

Instead hes ripped it out and torn it apar

(Lust is certainly dangerous when it stands alone. When everything exclusively revolves around our self-interests - when we solely live for our passions - we objectify others and fail to love them as we should)

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  • READ BETWEEN THE LINES

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Two people feel this strong emotional attraction towards one another, though they barely really know about each others personalities, you see only each others strengths and good side, everything is rosy, mushy feeling of happiness,It is love that is untested by hardships, and therefore may or may not last in the long-term.Be careful of being in love with the "concept of love" itself, rather than for who the person is Over-relying on pure emotion without the balance of logic is a recipe for failure.Lust is passionate love that yearns to find fulfillment in object of its longing.First, in order to exist lust is dependent upon the situation and circumstances. As long as a couple is enjoying a romantic situation, lust can thrive. But, as soon as hurtful words or actions appear, lust simply evaporates.

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting.  Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me

– WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

 

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Nardine Sanderson

Dear sir williamsji, great between the lines, of Laura weghtons lust.
interesting read, well done Laura, love to both, nardine Sanderson xoxo

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