POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Lily Mae's Poem " The Good girl in Me wants to Scream"

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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes

on Lily Mae's  Poem

" The Good girl in Me wants to Scream "

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 Lily Mae's poem 

The Good girl in Me wants to Scream

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Down on all fours 
I weep in my shadow 

You see  I have a secret 
that not even you know 

(Revelations of a victim)

My insides twist 
with thoughts of my own revealing 

The depth of this primal urge 
you are slowly stealing 

(Beautiful expressions from the author)

My skin is soaked in sin 
while my heart pumps needles and thread 

Wanting to scream my truth 
but the fear of loosing you fills my head 

(I should appreciate the courage and honesty of the author at this juncture)

Ok (knock on wood) here I go 

I want to fuck you from the inside out 
so hard your balls run on dry 

No more whispers in my den of iniquity 
just your breathless fucks driving deep inside 

(Highly sensual and impressive expressions)

Cry out my name..cry out my sin 
bruise my flesh then do it again and again 

In all honesty...minus the fear of rejection 
I have to say 

(Poem is incomplete)

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Fuck is an English language word, an obscene word which refers to the act of sexual intercourse .The word is also commonly used to denote disdain or as an intensifier

The word's use is considered obscene in social contexts, but is common in some informal and familiar situations. It is unclear whether the word has always been considered vulgar, and, if not, when it first came to be used to describe, often in an extremely angry, hostile or belligerent manner, in an unpleasant circumstances or people in an intentionally offensive way. In the modern English -speaking world, the word fuck is often considered highly offensive. Most English-speaking countries censor it on television and radio as well as literature.

I am truly delighted in saying that Poetess Lily Mae is bold and very honest to her writing, I find very rare authors does this, please accept my applause,

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting.  Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me

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