POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Nardine Sanderson's poem "Take away thy senses"

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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Nardine Sanderson's poem "Take away thy senses" posted on 16th June
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Take away thy senses;
Let thy rest
In peaceful sleep,Take away thy senses,
Thy lovers scent still seeps,
These comfort sheets
No console
Nor shelter thee,
Thy space in timeless,
Empty,
Emptiness that haunts,
thy souls soul,
" prosecutions, reach,,take away thy senses ,
For a sleeping soundly breach,
Or rip thy hearts, heart out,"Forget thy love to preach"
take away thy senses,
no more.
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Any of the faculties by which a stimulus response from outside or inside the body are received and felt, as the faculties of hearing, sight, smell, touch, taste, and equilibrium are called as sensing in real meaning. This is also called a perception or feeling produced by a stimulus; sensation: a sense of fatigue and hunger. Both faculties and utilities of sensation as means of providing physical gratification and pleasure is amazing to body and mind. They are about how we attend and create meaning: from immediate data or after deeper thought. Sensing will give awareness to both immediate data from their five senses and from their own direct experiences. They are creating meaning from conscious thought, rather than trusting their subconscious, limiting their attention to facts and solid data. As necessary, they will happily dig into the fine detail of the situation. They focus on what is immediate, practical and real, and live. life as it is rather than trying to change the world. They like logic and tend to pursue things in a clear sequence. At work, they will have a clear schedule and like to use their proven skills in tactical situations. They may be seen as frivolous or short-sighted by Intuitions. Intuitions process data more deeply than sensors and are happy to trust their subconscious and 'sixth sense', gut feel, intuition or whatever you want to call it. They are good at spotting patterns and taking a high-level view, as opposed to digging into the detail. They like ideas and inspiration and tend to have a focus on the future, where they will plan to change the world rather than continue to live in the imperfect present. Congrats dear Poetess Nardine Sanderson for sharing your wonderful verse with us.
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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting. Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me
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Very in-depth and clear imagery on senses , sir williamsji xx, thank you for including my write" Take away thy senses" , much love and appreciation to you sir, nardine Sanderson xx
Dear Poetess Nardine,
You are a shining star now in COSMO, Please accept my congrats and all deepest sentiments, you being inspired and pouring more and more poems on love and life. What we can do something in life is support and understanding. I am happy that your writing is moving fast in this channel. My love, my support for your writings, Happy poems.
Love, regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you sir williamsji, i am ever so thankful for your support, love and respect, happy writing's to you too sir, love to you, nardine Sanderson xx
Dear Nardine Sanderson,
Many thanks for your appreciation on my POET'S PEN, I am sorry I could not answer your message earlier,
Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI