POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Piusha Singh's Poem "Eccentric Twinkle"
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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Piusha Singh's Poem "Eccentric Twinkle"
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- Eccentric Twinkle
- By
- Poetess Piusha Singh
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- A voice recuperates around
- in my silence, in a hazy dawn.
- Navigated from a jungle of strayed Â
- thoughts, to drown once more in Â
- the verses to calm my edgy mind.
(This is a cry from a Soul departing from a recognized, conventional, or established norm or pattern in a strange and fantasy environment. Â Â A deviation means from a circular path as in an elliptical orbit of love)
- Intangible  encounters, entwined
- the nomadic souls in search of
- eternal mist,endearingly forever.
- Impatiently awaited to drench
- in a strange ascetic faith gained.
(If you believe that you or someone you care about has unusual difficulty in interacting with others, get involved in their activities to love and to condole) Â
- Intense vibes of arrival of my eternal
- peace ,in the ambiance of an exotic
- ancient truth prevailed, radiating out.
- Glazed the shady dispositions of our beings.
- Instantly froze in this eccentric twinkle.
(There may be a relatively minor adjustment issues, or a personality disorders which  may be involved. Personality disorders are very common in people who think or do a brain work, especially writers, scientists)
- Lately surrendering  to this enduring goal,
- attained endless delight in blending the
- cognition's,awaken  from my deep slumber.
- Quest for a stormy ardor attained ,hope
- to burn constantly in this perpetual shine.
(Persons or individuals with schizoid personalities tend to be introverted, withdrawn, solitary, emotionally cold, and distant. They are often absorbed with their own thoughts and feelings and are fearful of closeness and intimacy with others)
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Every interpersonal affiliation between two people is unique in its own ways, and many different factors are involved in shaping how well each relationship works. What people rarely know about, or even understand, is when one or both persons have a personality conflict or disorder and drown into fantasy. Yet when a person does have such a chaos, this will dramatically change the ways in which they interact with other people. Such disorders can cause problems in every area of a person’s life, and it is important to seek association of people who give comfort and a heal of touch. These people may have odd or eccentric manners of speaking or dressing. Strange, bizarre, or suspicious beliefs and thoughts are common. They may react inappropriately or not react at all during a conversation, or they may talk to themselves. They can also display signs of “magical thinking” by saying they can see into the future or read other people’s minds.
Dear Poetess Piusha Singh, please accept my congrats for sharing this verse with COSMO readers, You poems carry vivid themes of life situations and you depict them each in a high level thought provoking manner, Keep writing, search themes from your life situations and environments, Good luck God bless.
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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting. Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me
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Dear All valuable viewers,
Many thanks for your valuable votes to my POET'S PEN
Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Dear author drunkenwolf,
Many thanks for your most valuable comments and I really appreciate your initiative in this regard.
In social life, love, fantasy world, relationships, a tendency remains with many of us towards a solitary lifestyle, secretiveness, emotional coldness, and lack of interest. Affected individuals may simultaneously demonstrate a rich, elaborate and exclusively internal fantasy world.
I am sure your doubt is only because, I used a word " schizoid personalities." If you take up the meaning, it is almost referred in the first para of my comments, and this is why I insist viewers or readers to take a look at my column POET'S PEN, But to my astonishment, what I observed is this, except the author of the poem, I do not think any body is reading my column . Of course, atleast the concerned authors is giving me a courtesy reply, No body is bothered to discuss the poem and it is being abandoned badly after few minutes or few days, whereas I preserve them, study them and make detailed analysis on it which most of the readers do not entertain. Poetry has become a "casual write and read abandon" attitude, I just started writing this column " POET'S PEN " and :" SUNDAY MUSINGS" to take a return of olden days to love, appreciate, analyze and discuss poems, It is a right time you came up with a good question which I really appreciate,
Believe me even I use my cell phone to contact authors to describe on which situation a particular poem was written and what was the circumstance and inspiration for it, but I should never enter into their minds to extract those feelings as most of the poems are from Poets' personal feelings or life experiences, I wish to get a return message, both from you Sir and from Poetess Piusha Singh who would like to express seriously on her poem,
Love, regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Dear author drunkenwolf,
I really appreciate your valuable points, and for sure, I have featured in my POET'S PEN beginners as well, and hopefully, I can include each and everyone as far as possible, Some authors may not like my analysis or interpretations, hence I take prior permission from them, I am still awaiting permission from so many, it is not a few selected poets or Poetess, however, I am happy at least, this is the first ever comment I did receive since the introduction of my column. Thanks for the same, I love to receive comments from Poetess Piusha Singh and her friends as well, Welcome to all,
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Dear Poet Eddie,
I hope and I wish Poetess Piush Singh might have few version from her own side, She might have tied up with her work front.
Thanks for your discussion of the above poem in detail. I really appreciate your good efforts, As an author who takes poetry as a serious work, I must say a special thanks to you dear Brother Eddie.
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Hi William and Eddie,very glad to read your views.And I thank you both for finding time to think and talk about this poem.I should say that this Poem is not about schizophrenia first.This is about a woman who throughout her life,awaited for her lost love in previous life.In her current life she had an intense cry within her soul,a memory of her own existence as from different planet,a memory of neglecting her love,which she will be doing again awaiting to meet her soul mate.Eventually she will have an encounter with her celestial love in human form,no need was there for any introduction,instantly they recognized each other and realizing their love.Her long await was over finally.This write is about her restless mind finding solace in her soul mate,her descriptions about their encounters and lately she feels she is awake from her deep sleep (metaphor for dull life) into reality.Her quest for love is eventually attained.
Thnxxx a million
Cheers to both of you.
Dear Poetess Piusha Singh,Poet Drunken Wolf ( Eddie)
Many thanks for your bright exposure of your poem, As the draft script will go for print shortly, I shall make adequate amendment in my POET'S PEN as early as possible, My gratitude and my love to both Poetess Piusha Singh and to Poet Drunken Wolf ( Brother Eddie )
Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI