POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Piusha Singh's Poem " Entity "
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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on on Piusha Singh's Poem " Entity "
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- Entity
- By Piusha Singh
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Birth and death inevitable in the wheel of life
(True, I was supposed to be born, and destined to death somewhere and some times ahead of time of behind the time's wave-length. But now my entity is  independent, separate, or self-contained existence as my own or myself)
I died when I was born out of your womb,
 (The word "Entity " in the context of this verse means the living light bestowed upon this universe that triggered existence itself. The veteran Poetess Piusha Singh highlights this " Entity" as the embodiment of life)
Each seconds I died in eternal bliss,
( Every seconds, death is taking place in its own eternal life process, very true )
And my rebirth imminent after my death....
( A rebirth is for sure, but it is unpredictable and unknown to human. Only Souls can understand its syntax )
Should i be in this cycle of death and life?
(All are coming under its cycle of birth and death, birth is death and death is another birth, It is not a re-birth, it is another kind of birth, not physical, but celestial or eternal or divine)
Smashing this chain of circuit a new desire...
(The birth, or entrance into black, endless space, was violent. There is no telling if The Entity was here by accident or with purpose. As the light fought against darkness, stars and planets were born including a planet at the very spot The Entity entered - Earth.)
Brewing within me since i entered in this nullity
( This expression is the most poetic in this verse )
A devotion towards the vast expanse of nonentity.
( The Entity's influence spread, life was created and, with life, emotions and devotions too As emotions began to manifest, so did the emotional embodiments )
Judgement ruled this plane of existence
(The final judgment is being combined with birth and death and throughout life and this gives us the power to override)
 Is advertising this emptiness a devotion?
(Mother's womb was empty, but God's grace made it fulfilling and devotional )
Fell in the abyss of my primordial emotion
( We all are victims of others actions in life, this action of entity continues)
Challenged to float in this cataclysm of fidelity..
(This will have to float in the oceans of disaster)
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A entity in life is something that exits in itself, actually or hypothetically. It need not be of material or physical existence. In particular, abstractions and fictions are usually regarded as entities in life, which is not the real entity. It is eternal in its nature or form. Life is a mirage; it exists, but vanishes in itself. My applause and love to Poetess Piusha Singh for sharing this poem with COSMOFUNNEL readers. We expect more verses from her golden pen. Wishing her Good luck, God bless.
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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting. Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me
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Thnxx a million dear William for including my poem for your poet's pen.This poem i like very much among many other creation of mine ,written when i was extremely low,it has shades of me all over .A very genuine write of my emotions.I enjoyed reading your interpretations.I am inspired to write today,I got the urge William to hold my pen again...don't think me as a lazy woman..lol...Thnxxx a million.
Love
Piusha Singh,
For me to write a poem of 8 lines or 16 lines is easy, but to make an analysis or appreciation review, it may take time, but I devote an approach and a firm determination as well. After doing these kind of exercise, it makes five to ten minutes only for me to write one "POET'S PEN". I wish to compile my POET'S PEN write-ups into a book later, after collecting copy rights from all authors, including yours.
Love
WILLIAMSJI
My POET'S PEN was a new feature introduced by me with COSMO approval which I feel, I had enough thoughts to scribble and input. THANKS for your sincere support.
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
An exceptionally beautiful write miss Piusha Singh, you have a wonderful way with words, much appreciated between the lines sir Williamsji,
love these lines
"Life is a mirage; it exists, but vanishes in itself"
much love nardine Sanderson xoxo
Hi sweetie,thnxxx a million for appreciating my work  dear .
Love
Sir WilIiamji,
I remember her first (birth) on this site Sir WilIiamji,(felt that fitting for this particular poem) and for some strange reason, she had doubted her talents back then but there is those, that still contains their best works, still locked up inside, just itching to be released but “Piusha,” is an exception to the rule, her best tends to keep getting better and it appears to be no stopping her poems of analytical perfection. She stated way back when, that she wanted to make a personal mark or statement to herself with her works on Cosmo and that, when she first arrived, she wasn't as comfortable nor confident with her status as a poetess and a story writer and now as stated, “she’s a runaway train with her style, skills and method of writing both,(poetry and storytelling)”...I enjoy (All) of her readings and as I enter into one curious and hungrily, to try to absorb the vibes, which was placed into the poem/story, as it was illustrated, to be, meant read, by the author. From her works, my appetite is always refreshed and quintessentially quenched, from this particular author/poetess. She, should feel real good and extremely proud, of her superlative abilities, at writing poetry, because we sure are, (of her)…Extremely admirable lady, with a heart of Gold and as refreshing, is her spirit, as a freshly retrieved, “clam white pearl.” A strong manner of passion, for the works she creates and always has a lovely word, for the day, from all she accosts….. “I commend you,” and proud, of what you said you would do and you did, Which was once quite a while back, you stated others whom you knew personally had mixed emotions of your works, To truly understand what they were reading, meant they had to know you, as a person and as who you are and trust me, They definitely did not know you and their lost is our gain, here on “Cosmo Funnel…” Proud of you Missy………Really love your poem and as Nardine conveyed, lovely break down of poem Sir Williamji, gives higher charge to all poems,(intensity) and complete clarity to the meaning of the poem, from beginning to end and for beginners, as well as seasoned readers and young, as well as older poets/poetess. For those that venture out there still, in poem/art world, looking for a home, (join us)...Â
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Hi Jim,My deep gratitude for such wonderful remarks about me.I am still the same the girl with her silly thoughts.And i truly enjoy your work.Among few poet's in here at cosmo,you are one among those few poets, whose work i will be actually waiting to read.And proud of you too dear Jim,Thnxxx for your appreciation Jim
Cheers !
Sir Jim Arnold Sir,
Thanks dear Sir Jim Arnold Sir for your deep thoughts on the poem of Poetess Piusha Singh. She is an amazing Poetess in COSMO family now.
Intermittently in life there are those moments of unspeakable fulfillment which cannot be completely explained by those symbols called words. Their meanings can only be articulated by the inaudible language of the heart. Piusha Singh is a wonderful lamp to throw drops of light and love to others. She is very loyal, polite and committed to her professional duties as a dedicated staff performing her assignments sincerely and when work, commitment, and love all become one and you reach that deep well where passion lives, nothing is impossible.
Appreciating someone's Poems does not make you or me  less important. This is not a war of ego. Your words of appreciation reveal your humble and generous nature. By appreciating others, your value does not depreciate! On the contrary, you look good in the eyes of others. As far as POET'S PEN title is concerned, I am obliged to Piusha Singh, for she is the one who suggested this title for my column " POET'S PEN ", thanks dear sister for your support for my column. I extend my my gratitude and deepest sentiments to you dear Brother Sir Jim Arnold for your appreciation of my column, Love to you dear Brother (Sir) Jim Arnold Sir) and to my dearest Poetess (Sister) Piusha Singh
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Love to my dear Friend William,you are such an amazing person,with extreme creativity
Dear Poetess Piusha Singh,
Creativeness in poetry or inspirational performance is an act of turning new and imaginative ideas into reality. Creativity is characterized by the ability to perceive the world in new ways, to find concealed patterns, to make dealings between seemingly unrelated phenomena, and to generate solutions. Creativity involves two processes: thinking, then producing. If you have ideas, but don’t act on them, you are imaginative but not creative.
As far as POETESS PIUSHA SINGH is concerned, you are CREATIVE from the imaginative point of view, but needs a boost on the inspirational level, Thanks for your most valuable comments on POET'S PEN.
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI