POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Piusha Singh's Poem " Kernel Axis"

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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Piusha Singh's Poem "Kernel Axis"
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- Kernel Axis
- By Poetess Piusha Singh
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- Persisting pressure building within
- Seeking a spout to discharge this ooze
- Clogging the perspiring existence
- Concealing the radiance of a shoot.
(The truth is, often like women in a community, their originality always questioned, but they are complete in their own wholeness and ambiguity)
- Impregnating the pale shades of mine
- Pivot around the rudimentary core
- Surviving in the leftovers of your roots.
- Bordering the kernel axis of the core.
(Men and women think differently not only at times, but most of the times, but the biggest difference is this. Men forget, but never forgive; women forgive, but never forget.)
- Clubbed around the concourse of focus
- Dissipated in the intensity to unify
- Couldn't consolidate in the laws of circle
- Dominance overrides the prime keys.
(If you cannot inspire a woman with feel affection for of you, fill her above the edge with love of herself all that runs over will be yours)
- Staying in the peripheral realms of base.
- Planted focus to converge in the median
- Concealing the flaring drips my essence
- Edging to gather to centralize the principal note.
(Some women are meant to change the humankind, while others are meant to hold it together. And then there are those of us who simply don't want to be in it, because we know no matter how much we struggle, we can't comfortably fit into the situations of life)
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- READ BETWEEN THE LINES
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" Kernel Axis " is a theme or a thought on the area under the curve of a density function representing the probability of getting an x value between a range of x values, but then how can the y-axis be greater than 1 when I make the bandwidth small?. Poetess Piusha Singh is symbolically bringing the aspects of human life to synchronize with the theme of present life and past love in terms of " Kernel Axis"
The bandwidth of the kernel is a free parameter which exhibits a strong influence on the resulting estimate. To illustrate its effect, we take a simulated random sample from the standard normal distribution. This poems seems to be one of the best verses from the golden pen of Poetess Piush Singh.
According to Poetess, quoting in her own words words:
The poem highlights the effects of a women's life where she is living on the memories of her lost love her own words, Kernel axis a quest about a woman's life; she is realizing her failures, in life and in love. Frustrations building up but she is unable to express herself out to anyone, feeling her repressed. She feels herself always as a lone stone so the core is the woman on a quest realizing by remembering her experiences. Eventually she is heading towards her inner truth.
Please accept my congratulations for sharing a wonderful verse to COSMO viewers, but initially the poem looks bit obscure in nature, but in a deep reading and imagination, it brings out the agonies and sadness of human life.
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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting. Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me
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Hi William , thnxxx a million for appreciating my small work.I couldn't express my happiness,I m swelling within my body.Kernel Axis is truly a creation I look with lot of admiration.I felt very happy after writing this piece.Sorry for the delayed response,i woke up quickly ,so couldn't resist to peek in.
Love
Dear Poetess Piusha Singh
Though the poem is short, it carries a heavy load of dormant expressions of love. You are very choosy in gathering words and sentences which are sometimes obscure in nature. You hold a good vocabulary, either gained through reading good poetry and prose, or by way of enhanced poetic expressions from your life experience. If one has a large vocabulary, one can pick and choose to find just the right word. And choosing the right word can make a difference in several ways.Good luck and May God Bless
Love & Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Dearest piusha, this is an amazing write, i completely understand and agree with your views, these lines to me stood out
"Men and women think differently not only at times, but most of the times, but the biggest difference is this. Men forget, but never forgive; women forgive, but never forget.)"
your a strong and beautiful lady sweetie, appreciate reading your work,
much love to you nardine xoxo
sir williamsji another great between the lines,
well done to both of you, love to you
Nardine xoxo
Dear Nardine Sanderson,
Thanks for your understanding an love towards my verse,
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI