POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Piusha Singh's Poem " Pearls"

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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Piusha Singh's poem " Pearls" posted on 25th June
APPRECIATION REVIEW
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- PEARLS
- By Piusha Singh
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Teary smile
( A smile diluted in a drop of sorrows)
Fuming heart
( A heart which erupts in fumes after its burnings)
Rolling pearls
(Tears are pure, salty, wet and lovely tasting feelings and attachments of love)
of hidden whirls...
(To turn with great velocity on an axis of life)
Covert shadows
( Hidden or concealed frames of sun beams-shadows )
Dawn to dusk
( Morning to till night falls )
Wander veiled
( Wearing a mask )
in musky gust...
( In a sudden blast of a ardent wind , carrying a strong-smelling substance derived from the male musk-deer )
Curious lamps
( In a sign of curious learning )
Sown damp
( To scatter the seeds of a dead-end )
Drilling cramps
( Piercing into hampering pain )
In moist camps...
( In wet areas to immerse down )
Tricky stitch
( A magical smoothing )
In cricky glitch
( In a strong fault or hook )
Drip in ditch
( Deep down into a trench )
As a twitchy witch...
( Like a sorceress woman )
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- READ BETWEEN THE LINES
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Tears are like valuable pearls for all, especially for women in general. The tears of the mind are the ones that no one sees. These concealed tears flow down inside us from a deep and inner endless place of pain and joy. We may smile but it only masks the true feelings that we are holding deep in our inner sacred space. Each sensitivity or heart ache is related to others that have gone on before and hold a recollection. Just when we think that the pain has stopped we are faced with another emotional challenge that triggers the endless sea of pain. Loneliness is the reason we seek comfort in our life and love is the answer to all things. When we end a relationship the deep blue's can help us find the way back to the living. The remembering lets us find that place of trust that was shattered and lost. Some people spend their whole lives looking for love; they may never find that one true and perfect love. Love comes when you not ready, it is the only one emotion where we have no control over. Love can take over our mind and emotions blocking out everything. We are obsessed with love, we are possessed with love, and we are caressed with love. We dream of love and seek love in all things we do and say. Love can be beautiful and painful in one sweeping flood of emotions that release our heart and mind. Great write dear Poetess Piusha Singh, Expecting more heart-felt, but powerful verses from your golden pen. My respect, regards, love and applause to you.
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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting. Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me
– WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Posted on 26th June @1640 hours, Indian Time
Poem Copy Right Reserved with Poetess Piusha Singh
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A spectacular review the way you dissect poetry and bring it into new light is pure genius
I am really thankful to your read and comments, I love poetry and I respect all Poets in this universe. Love, regards to you Stephen for your support,
WILLIAMSJI
Thnxxx a milion dear William,and very interesting to see your dissection of my verses .Good work.Tears are not limited to women,it's universal to all animals.And this write was not my style of writing.Unlike freestyle,it was an experimental write with rhyming of words .I thoroughly enjoyed writing it.
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You did an amazing job with it Puisha Much respect
Thanks dear Stephen for your comments and support on this column, POET'S PEN
WILLIAMSJI
Thnxxx a million Stephen for your kind remarks...