POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Piusha Singh's poem "Poison"
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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Piusha Singh's poem "Poison" posted on 05th May
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- " POISON "
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Love showered in abundance, (Love showers, not from heaven, but from our human mind's. True, dear Soul, please keep quite. Please do not disturb my love)
but got addicted to a poison, ( Poison is a chemical combination to ruin the blood in our veins. Addiction brings depressions in life. Drinks, sweets, Love, lust-all are coming under the head category-addictions)
an emotional poison around. ( Here the word poison needs to be changed to another word for the sake of avoiding a repeat of a word with in an poem itself, only a suggestion)
Spreading slowly in thoughts ( Poison spreads like love)
day and night,wrecking my ( Once in love of whatsoever nature, the thoughts will haunt you day and night. Well depicted)
circadian rhythm. ( The circadian rhythm is a daily cycle of biological activity based on hour to hour period and influenced by regular variations in the environment, such as the alternation of night and day. Circadian rhythms include sleeping and waking , flower blossoming closing and opening in present in humans and most other animals, is generated by an internal clock that is synchronized to light-dark cycles and other cues in an organism's environment. This internal clock accounts for waking up at the same time every day even without an alarm clock )
Making his place selfishly, ( Life becomes selfish for themselves)
engraving me in addictive tranquility. ( Life and its habits makes all of us addictive either or in some good or bad doings which is quite natural)
Thought to relish each sip ( Drops of lights and vision in life has now become poisonous )
but irresistibly swallowed in
haste..
Even though mind resisting ( If mind is weak, then body will never allow for anything, purely a physiological approach)
hard,silly heart craving to
drown in this lethal venom.. (Again life has become a journey to death)
Curious eyes like a child ( This usage is highly poetical. I really love it)
eager to view his deadly
effigy...( Beautiful imagery, I love thi line)
Longing to get the kiss of
death.No escape from this (Let today be the last day you stop being haunted by the ghost of yesterday. Holding a grudge or harboring anger or resentment is poison to the soul. Get even with people...but not those who have hurt us, forget them, instead get even with those who have helped us)
gulf of toxins ..... (The thirst or love to get into the embrace of death is well presented by the Poetess)
Don't want anyone to enter (The poetess is not giving an entry permit into her soul of love. Celestial depiction of love in life)
the cave deep within me, (The cave represents the whole soul or body as and where as it is)
where treasures of depressions (Depressions never becomes treasures, This concept is bit vague. Depression leads to death and decay of life)
growing eternally.....(This poem is beautiful and I really admire the Poetess for sharing with us. Congrats and love to you dear Poetess Piusha Singh)
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- READ BETWEEN THE LINES
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Life is not that much chaotic as it seems to be for anyone. Nothing is worth diminishing in your life and love. Nothing is worth poisoning yourself into stress, anxiety, and fear. There are poisons that blind you, and poisons that open your eyes. Open your eyes and see the beauty of life and nature around us. Do not get confused with contentment with happiness
Challenges in life can either enrich you or poison you. You are the one who decides. Congratulations for your lovable verses and wish you good luck in future. My applause and my love to your poem.
BY
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting. Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me
– WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
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Posted on 12th June @ 0800 hours Indian time
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Dear William, I really appreciate your efforts to read between the lines.And this was a romantic poem written with metaphors opposite to usual form.Where I am saying to my lover that I got addicted to an emotional poison drilling within me deep.And there is no escape from this as I know love will have bitter ends so I am reluctant to allow him to enter in my inner Kingdom. And life is a misery she feels herself born with that crown...Good to see you trying to encourage each one of us...
Love
Dear Respected and Honorable Poetess: PIUSHA SINGH,
After greetings of the day,
I, the poet, have a certain consciousness, moulded by my own social world. As a Poet, I am concerned with my artistic and poetic consciousness, since forty years of writing literature as well as other fellow author's, represented by the direct and indirect effect on me of all the poems, stories and art, which I have come across and I have well felt, experienced and all the emotional organization which has produced in me a conscious subject. This consciousness is contradicted by my experience – that is, I have a new personal experience, something not given in the social world of poetry. Therefore I desire what is called self-expression but is really self-socialization, the casting of my private experience in such a form that it will be incorporated in the social world of poetry and appear as appreciation and analysis via my " POETS PEN " Column. This column as well as my " SUNDAY MUSINGS", "CAPUSLES" "STORYLINE", "SEASHELLS" represents the negation of the negation – the synthesis between the existing world of poetry, art, music and literature along with all the existing consciousness or theory and my experience, life or practice.
Therefore at the finish the world of Poetry will be changed by the incursion of my "POET'S PEN". That is the revolutionary aspect of my role as an evaluator or at least as a normal reader or audience. But also my consciousness will be changed because I have, through the medium of the art world, forced my life experience, new, dumb and unformulated, to become conscious, to enter my conscious globe.Love to you and to your golden pen.
With Love, Respect & Regards to all viewers of COSMOFUNNEL,
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI