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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Poetess Pepper's poem " Inside,Beyond the Sun"

POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Poetess Pepper's poem " Inside,Beyond the Sun"

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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Poetess Pepper's poem " Inside,Beyond the Sun" posted on

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  • Inside,Beyond the Sun
  • By Poetess Pepper

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Awaking into the world of elders,

my heart had stopped beating

and so had my head ,

then the roars of the awls ,

the kings that govern the night 

and fly hand in hand with the mighty witches of the Azande Tribe,

leaving no trace but the alarms raised by angelic dogs,

feeble men in sleepy heads nod  in awareness of the spiritual,

there we assemble , 

as one whole community,

(Poetess Pepper's poetry strength lies in using simple symbolic expressions to convey the deepest meaning throughout her above verse. Her style is very impressive. She should have joined COSMO early, so that we could have enjoyed more of her amazing poems, My applause and Congrats to Poetess Pepper.)

souring high above the endless clouds,                             

beyond the horizon of space ships and and stars,

i saw the world in a whole new mirror,

life was nothing but a chess game,

the atmosphere was nothing but glass stair cases,

as man roamed bounded in boundless small circle of large circle,

elders laughed and ate cola,

at the ignorance of man,

then i turned inside to stare ,

 nothingness of our fulfillment,

this story is nothing but a tip of Nana's chewing stick,

but one spirit struck me,

(Some poetry types are specific to scrupulous cultures and genres and act in response to characteristics of the language in which the poet writes. Readers familiar to identifying poetry with Dante, Goethe, Mickiewiewicz and Rumi  may think of it as written in words or lines and  based on rhyme and regular indicators or symbols ; there are, however, traditions, such as Biblical poetry that use other means to create rhythm and euphony. Much modern poetry reflects a critique of poetic tradition and the beautiful expressions used in the above lines are superb. My applause to her golden pen)

i had seen no face,

i saw nothing but

i stood with many,

 i heard the chattering and laughter's of many,

i saw the fishes walk and run,

the snakes flew without wings,

and man lived without limit,

life was the opposite of life,

just when the king was to arrive,

and realities begin to unveil,

my grandmother said to me

you must return, 

before no one leaves,

before life awakes,

for this world belongs to the elders,

the holders of life's foundation,

my soul ran for temporary salvation,

but i had to leave a drop of me behind,

to trace me back,

(Poetry is a form of literature that uses aesthetic and rhythmic qualities of any language.—such as pharses, phonaesthetics, symbolism, and metre—to evoke meanings in addition to, or in place of, the prosaic  ostensible meanings or instant  clues.Hope, Poetess Pepper will come out of her shell and will expose in her own real name and in specific and distinct personality in poetry writing, My good wishes and applause to her)

when finally,

the pyramids of my fathers fall.

at least i would have a home,

back with the elders,

when the drums are beaten ,

by senile but able hands of legends....

then back we return , deep inside the sun,

i landed like a feather,

without memory of the other wing ,

as though nothing happened,

the sun was already awake,

she stared and gave me a shy smile of recognition

for in her was my escape to humanity,

i live now like today lasts till the sun melts,

Deep down,

i knew the story,

once that had never been told,

 ones being disguised in coats of  religion,

my soul with the elders ......

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The expression or the word Poetry in ancient Greek is to generate  an art form in which human language is used for its aesthetic qualities in addition to, or instead of, its notional and semantic content. It consists largely of oral or literary works in which language is used in a manner that is felt by its user and audience to differ from ordinary prose.Poetess Pepper in her poem titled " Inside,Beyond the Sun " has depicted beautiful  life experiences of her themes for poetry writing. Private experiences and feelings about death, upset, depression and relationships are  addressed in her poetry, the poetess reveals directly or indirectly his or her own experiences, problems and psychological complex in his or her poetry. The real subject matter of confessional poetry is the poet’s own self.

Poetry is for a creative awareness of experience expressed through meaning, sound, and rhythmic language choices so as to evoke a touching or emotional response. Poetry has been known to utilize meter and rhyme, but this is by no means necessary. Poetry is an ancient form that has gone through numerous and drastic reinvention over time. The very nature of poetry as a genuine and individual mode of expression makes it nearly impossible to define.

As far as Poetess Pepper is concerned Poetry is her life and she loves to depict distinct sketches of life through writing love poems, which is being reflected in her poem titled " Inside,Beyond the Sun" .

Please accept my congratulations and love for sharing such a meaningful verse for the viewers/readers of COSMO. Happy writings to your dear Poetess Pepper, God bless.

BY

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting.  Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me

– WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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