POET'S PEN : WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Poetess Valerie Lynn's Poem " Dominate "
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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Poetess Valerie Lynn's
poem titled " Dominate " posted on 04 th November, 2014
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- Whisper softly to me
- Beneath the sheets
- As l blindly obey
- Every command you demand
- Place the blindfold over my eyes
- Anxiously awaiting your surprise
(This is great verse of love on death. Poetess Valerie has cultivated the seeds of poetic expressions on death and suicide many times, The poem is superb in its theme, I love it.)
- Then grab my hands
- Tie them tightly behind my back
- Bound in a submissive position
- Tonight I am your fantasy
(The Poetess has depicted death as if she is in love with it, She explains to death, how to deal with her. This is highly appreciated by myself, She is an amazing poetess of love and life to me, My applause, My love)
- Take advantage and play with me
- Any way you want it
- Execute the dominate role
- My body is all yours
- As I let you take control
- Tease me
- Kiss me
- Bite me
- Satisfy me completely
- Keep the whispers coming
(The way and poetic style of Valerie Lynn is amazing and She is a poetess of realism in life, She undergoes pain and agony in day-to-day life, but still she loves to write lyrics, verses and stories, My applause and love to Poetess Valerie Lynn)
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READ BETWEEN THE LINES
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After reading in the same lines and in between the lines of Poetess Valerie Lynn, I wish to appreciate and review her fabulous love poem. Please accept my sincere congratulations and thanks for sharing a wonderful poem to COSMO readers.
One of the foremost inclinations to have paid serious attention to death is the poetess of love and despair. Indeed, their preoccupation with it has been so intense that without understanding the philosophy of death, It is almost impossible to make out their notion of life. Many Poets do not consider death a subject of intellectual exercise; they held it as a force that permeates the social, religious and philosophical sinews of life.
The codified rules of the art of inviting death, descriptive accounts of cultural, religious, spiritual and historical personalities who embraced it, and an interesting body of epigraphically nurtured on the archaeological remains, provide a rich corpus of information on those who voluntarily terminated their lives. Inviting death presented this history spread over a millennium and half, by way of despair, disease and love failures, I wish to compile all poems of Hon. Poetess Valerie Lynn for my appreciation column titled as POET'S PEN.
Regards & Love to you dear Poetess Valerie Lynn, from
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting. Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me
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Dear friend Poet,
This is my own interpretation, knowing the poetess mind, my interpretation goes like that for example:
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
However, Williamsji has an interesting take on the poem from his own point of view. I can see it as that considering I write about death and suicide so often. Now that I have read it from his point of view it gives me a different perspective on my own write which is really interesting.
Dear Poetess Valerie Lynn,
Thanks for your views on this poem, Shall I compose a reply poem in return of your poem, which others may also interpret in their own ways, I shall use your own style, but the theme will be death as usual,
Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Yes I would love to read it as death as the theme!
Val ♥️
Dear Author,
The concept of love in literature and poetry is equivalent to that of LOVE, First love may be trap for someone, for other a marriage r love is a half death, and Love is a full death, You may die for your love, I am ready to contribute an article based on that poem of Valerie Lynn,
Let Valerie Lynn may also comment on this write in my POET'S PEN. I have already said that this is my own interpretation in a poetic way, How do you interpret if I write a two line poem as below:
I love to continue this as a matter of arbitrary discussion
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Dear Author,
My love and respect to you, I have written columns similar like POET'S PEN. The main idea of this column is to elaborate the view and comments in detail, bringing poets theme, mixed with my interpretation and revive the theme for the birth of another theme, I wish to not to explain the meaning of the whole verse, but to interpret it from a different perspective,
Much love to your dear author,
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
I like that idea. I think you do a wonderful job at it and it is very unique! I appreciate the review! Thank you BigBro!
Val ♥️
Dear Poetess Valerie,
I wish to go back into your old poems to appreciate and review them, with your kind approval,
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thanks dear author, Love to join your treat,
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI