POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Stephen Hosendove's poem " DISAPPOINTMENTS OF LOVE "

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POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes Stephen Hosendove's poem DISAPPOINTMENTS OF LOVE posted on 27th June
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- DISAPPOINTMENTS OF LOVE
- By
- Stephen Hosendove
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DISAPPOINTMENTS OF LOVE
Throughout my years, it seems that I've
falling in and out of love
(Love is a sentiment, an emotional expression experienced by the many, but really enjoyed by very few)
the initial feelings of excitement and joy
turn to broken hearts, and remorse
(Sometimes the heart sees what is invisible to the eye.)
from happiness to tears, celebration to sighs
heavy hearts filled with displace
will I ever find the one, who's
truly meant to be my world
(Love takes a path from happiness to tears)
or continue to choose the same
woman, different face
Is it just that I'm too afraid
to branch out, so I stick
with my comfort zone
too afraid to try something
I'm not accustomed to,
so I settle for what I know
A lot of one night stands,
lot's and lot's of high wishes
how I crave to have my
last, first kiss
(A kiss is a lovely deception designed by nature to stop talking when words become surplus)
Can't get too excited and
this is the reason, no matter
how wonderful you seem,
you're only be around for
a season
so one door I close
(Let us always meet each other with smile, for the smile is the beginning of love.)
there's a knock, someone new
I relentlessly smile like this could
really be the one
yet inside of my heart, I already know
(Love takes off masks that we fear we cannot live without and know we cannot live within.)
that this isn't my future queen
it's just momentary fun
(Love is when the other person's happiness is more important than your own.)
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The real loveliness of a woman is not in a facial mole, but true beauty in a Woman is reflected in her soul. It is the caring that she lovingly gives, the passion that she knows. People are like stained-glass windows. They sparkle and shine when the sun is out, but when the darkness sets in, their true beauty is revealed only if there is a light from within. Beauty is not in the face; beauty is a light in the heart, If love is blind, then maybe a blind person that loves has a greater understanding of it. There is nothing more beautiful than someone who goes out of their way to make life beautiful for others. Nobody should be judged on their looks. Beauty is not found on the body but in the soul. The only thing the media has done is change the definition of the word. I mean being attractive may make it easier to catch someone but being kind and loving is how you keep some one.
Be yourself. Outer beauty pleases our eyes. Inner beauty captivates the heart. Beauty shouldn’t be about changing yourself to achieve an ideal or be more socially acceptable. Real beauty, the interesting, truly pleasing kind, is about honoring the beauty within you and without you. It’s about knowing that someone else definition of pretty has no hold over you. A truly enlightened soul is strong enough, is bright enough to live and shine through, A bright and beautiful soul can shine forth even from inside an equally beautiful surrounding. Excellent verse on love dear Poet Stephen Hosendove, Please accept my congratulations for sharing your loveable verse with COSMO viewers.
BY
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting. Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me
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Thanks for the intellectual and education dissection of my work I really appreciate it, It's an honor having my vision shared and explained on this forum a million thanks for your genius and insight.
Dear Stephen,
Many thanks for your response, I wish to bring up my column of POET'S PEN as an inspiration tools for all poets and poetess in COSMO FAMILY. I do believe that we are members of a big family, This universe is one country and COSMO is a place we interact, I love your poems, hopefully, let me try to appreciate all your poems through " Poet's Pen "
Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
First and foremost "Congratulations Stephen." (Some Good reading)…….
Written with wonderful insight of the individual being sponsored and the ability to sit with the individual (figuratively speaking), on this site, through media, is a positive and a step forward, in poetry and allow you to feel and know the prize,(1st,2nd,3rd) isn’t the reason I am on this site, it has nothing to do with it, although it is a wonderful incentive offered by “The Cosmo Funnel’s management and we (Thank You)Humbly but it is the conglomeration of good, to honest(individuals/couples) that tend to listen when you thank no one else is and the response is immediate, not days are sometimes weeks later and sometimes not at all. On this site,( the large majority), can honestly say, are here for the Sharing of Poems/Arts critiquing assistance, through others camaraderie and some may claim for a laugh, are two and for some others, may be, for a smile, at the end of a busy day and many others say, “for all,” the above.. The Cosmo Funnel’s, ”You are one big erected  logarithmic scale, ” Receiving Ear,” created and volunteered, to be heard, by the many,low pitched and*(deserved), to be heard voices, waywardly wondering, below all others, given level of measured  transmitted, decibel intensity detections, through an electrical signal.
(Mine, I guess I’ll just leave you guessing), for now…..
Job, (Well done), as always Sir WilIiamji
Jim,
Dear Sir Jim Arnold (Brother)
Thanks for your encouraging comments, I am still learning Stephen's Poems
Any man's (Poet/or Poetess)  life will be filled with steady and unexpected encouragement if done makes up their mind to do their maximum  level best each day,
Thanks dear Sir
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI