POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Tony Taylor's poem " Cherie Sumners Holy Water"

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 POET'S PEN: WILLIAMSJI MAVELI writes on Tony Taylor's poem titled  " Cherie Sumners Holy Water "posted on 21st August, 2014

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• Cherie Sumners Holy Water
• By Poet Tony Taylor

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There's a melodic frenzy, feeding, in lieu of your positively pristine presence
Making a bed of roses, out of the harmonic parts of your symphonic essence
You're a song that sings to me, and moves in me, measure to measure
A theatrical performance in progress, a melodic treasure

( Life needs to be a melody song as we all dream always, It should sing it's own songs of love. Bed of roses is an poetic English language expression originated from French. which means an easy and peaceful life. Most likely based on a rose representing happiness and love, so a bed of roses would represent a very happy life, COSMO Readers or viewers may note that the expression is from a line in Christopher Marlowe's Poem titled " The Passionate Shepherd to His Love "  This was published in 1599; Marlowe died in 1593 )

You're the tune I'm whistling, whenever my face has that silly smile
You know the one, that takes my love for you, and portrays me like a child
And I just can't help myself, I'm experiencing things I'd long forgotten
I'm so happy that I'm beside myself, when I realize my fears are misbegotten

(Pure love always carries a risk. The risk of love is loss and the price of loss is sorrow. But the pain of sorrow is only a shadow when compared with the pain of never risking love)

So although I try to convince myself, that all of this is just a dream
I find myself with your picture, the most beautiful thing I've ever seen
I feel like I'm seventeen again, I'm doing things against doctors orders
And the really interesting thing is, I've been improving without those borders

(Love can both devastate and save one. It is our deepest emotions that lay root to our most beautiful words)

You've opened up the world to me, in ways I can't explain
I think you know me well, I know you understand my pain
But then there is that one thing, that only you can provide
You give me courage, the will to go out there and try

(COSMO Readers should learn that only in the suffering of departure do we look into the depths of love)

Because, Everything you are
Has taken root in me
YOU have become MY heart
The "Holy Water" on my seeds.....

( Let me explain the concept of Holy water . This is a sacramental theme that serves the purpose of remitting venial sin. It is water which is sanctified by a priest for the purpose of baptism, blessing of places, objects, persons or as a means of repelling evil. The Holy Church urges its use upon its people especially when calamities occur because of the blessings attached to it. Here the Poet is expressing his feelings through the symbolic expression which is excellent. My applause and love to my brother Poet Tony Taylor)

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Holy water is water that has been blessed by a priest for use in symbolic purification. It is used for baptism, spiritual cleansing and as a sacramental for protection against evil. The holy water is kept in the font, which is typically located at the entrance to the church.

 Holy water is holy only insofar as it has been blessed by a priest. It is not magic and has no special properties. What matters are the prayers, faith and devotion that accompanies

Emotions have all sorts of words used to describe them.  You can make up your own word combinations of various emotions such as love, agony and despair.  For example the word "love" can mean so many things.  We hear phrases such as: "You look lovely", "Make love, not war", "I love to cook", "I love you", "I love, love."  Also the word "feel" is used in various ways: "I felt my heart drop",  "I feel hurt", "I have no feeling at so ever", "My arm feels sore", or "I have so much feelings for you.

If we are to investigate emotions we have to include the observer.  If a person meditates or enjoys classical music, then there a higher vantage point to view one's emotion.  There is great joy being spiritual and in love with something above and beyond us.

 Emotions and feelings stem from two great sources, namely the body (sickness, tired, etc) and other people (love, hate, anger, etc).  

Dear Brother Poet Tony Taylor, Please accept my congratulations for sharing this romantic verse with COSMO Viewers. May God bless you life with peace, prosperity and happiness, Yours lovingly,

• BY
• WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
• (Big Brother)
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ABOUT POET'S PEN: Williamsji Maveli writes a column titled "Poet's Pen" in view of bringing connectivity between the author and reader for a better understanding of poetic aspects in creativity perspective. This column will highlight on the content of a poem picked at random by the author, which will be appearing on daily basis as and when the authors feels to upload the posting.  Reader's valuable comments, both positive and negative are most welcome and will be highly appreciated by me

– WILLIAMSJI MAVELI