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A REVIEW OF WILLIAMSJI MAVELI'S POEM " REVELATIONS "

A REVIEW OF WILLIAMSJI MAVELI'S POEM " REVELATIONS  "

Your poem titled "Revelations" is a poem about the existential dilemmas that we encounter in our day to day life.The concept of love and its first declaration do have a greater impact on humanity.After the turbulences and chaotic aspects of life,we always reach that destination of deeper understanding and an area of negative state of being.
The meaning of love itself becomes transformative in tone and tenor.But the power of love is overwhelming and everlasting to a large extent.The concept of love is ever mysterious and enigmatic A to Z,the more it is at hand,the more it does have a greater impact in terms of our lives.But at the end of it all,the loneliness weighs us down to a considerable way and the life evolves into a meaningless state of affairs.Kudos to you for writing such a poem of exquisite nature.
Written by Cijo Joseph Chennelil Associate Professor Kristu Jyoti College of Management and Technology Chethipuzha Changanassary Kottayam District Kerala India All Copyrights Reserved@ On 10th August 2017.
Critic/Poet Cijo Joseph Chennelil
The Poem
Revelations 
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Revelations from your cherished words,
Echoes in my inner mind like love birds
Enlightening those songs, you sung
Engraved within my mind forever.
After years and fears of destiny
I ran into the cambers of darkness;
Setting off in grief, seeking a shield
from other’s eyes; arrows; uneasiness;
Even the Love shines a light at me
And knowingly, honestly.
I bow my head, earnestly,
Searching for a way to explain.
I ran further away from you;
I bow my head in deep confusion,
Hoping to disappear into the shadows
as moments crumble around me.
I cannot protect myself forever
from the rage of my grief,
Except by going deeper and deeper
into my own solitude.
BY
Williamsji Maveli

 

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