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"Santa Returns the Missing Gift"

One magical day in a land far, far, away, Christmas was at the brink of an end. Blasting his way through perilous storms, Santa was fighting for dear life. The night was cold as ever. The wind was blowing snow so treacherously hard, nothing was visible through Santa's hazel brown eyes. Even the deer guiding the bright red slay were at ends point. And out of nowhere,-Boom!-, Christmas was on the verge of being over. The rear of the slay collided into a massive tree, ripping the present bag open, sending gifts flying this way and that way through the air. One of the presents, which had fallen, landed in an old abandoned water well, while others fell on the ground in plain site. While on the ground Santa called for backup. He contacted headquarters requiring when all the presents would be retrieved, and also asked when the slay would be up and running. The elf told him all would be well within an hour. Searching high and low, Santa and the elf's retrieved all but one gift. The most precious gift of all lie behind in the most darkest place of all.

The storm finally decided to die down after all the monstrosity that had taken place. All was well. Or so they thought! Santa and his crew returned to the slay shortly after the storm came to a end, and fixed the slay using a welder, some metal, nuts, and bolts brought by backup. They tied all the reindeers back together ensuring all was well, and lifted off into the sky. The stars and moon were illuminating the sky above, helping guide the reindeer to each and every good child. The night was almost over, when Santa landed on the last brick house, containing the last child on his list. Santa poured some magic dust from a red velvet bag over his head, and jumped into the dark chimney, quizzing his way into the home, where he would deposit the last present under a Christmas tree. Reaching the Christmas tree, Santa reached into his overly large magical bag, but couldn't find the last gift. A gift that was asked for by a six year old girl whose name was Destiny. Destiny had asked for this particular gift over and over all year long, and promised that she would behave for her parents, her teachers, and even when she seen the doctor. Now all was lost. Everything she had done was for nothing. Or was it?

Santa was deeply upset about loosing the gift, and went to the girls room, where he stood watching the child snuggling with a teddy bear. It broke his heart envisioning the girls morning.  He didn't want to let Destiny down, after all that she had been through, after being good all year, even after taking a shot from the mean doctor. He decided right then and there he had to fix the problem at hand. Rising back up the chimney and standing on the roof top, Santa told his crew mates, " We lost the girls gift! Ready yourselves to make Destiny the happiest girl of all. We are going back to the crash site to find the girls gift, or my name isn't Saint Nick."  The team shook their heads and got  themselves ready for extraction. They rose into the night like a horse with wings, flying faster then a lightning bolt, dashing side to side,  finally reaching their destination. Saint Nick landed in the exact position from earlier, ensuring the chances of finding the gift. The crew searched the ground eagerly hoping to find it, but no one had any luck, so they all returned to the transportation grounds. Then Santa asked, " Does anyone have a clue where the present is located!" None of the elves had a clue. Then suddenly Tom the elf spoke up. "I seen an abandoned water well towards the east along my path. Maybe the gift fell into it." Santa acknowledged Tom and they went to see. They walked about a hundred yards or so until reaching it, and the elf's stood there shining their lights into the overwhelming darkness, seeing a gift float on top the water below. Luckily one of the elf's had a jet pack on at all times or no one could have gotten it. He flew down and retrieved the gift, and then they were off to save Christmas. They returned to the home right before sun rise, and Santa went down the chimney, but this time with present in hand placing the gift under the tree at last. Saint Nick decided to stay on the roof top until  Destiny opened her gift. He waited for a hour or so. Destiny woke up a little later and rushed down stairs, looking toward the tree, seeing the shiniest and most overwhelming gift of all. Reaching the tree, she saw on the wrapping itself was written- Love Santa & Merry Christmas Destiny-. Destiny tore the wrapping paper off and got what she had been asking for all year, a unicorn maid by elf's, and smiled happily. With Destiny smiling at that very moment,Santa smiled, got into his slay, and road the wind all the way to the north pole. The End.

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Thomas Russell

Thank you it took about two hours to wright. To introduce the characters and end it as soon as I did is hard to do sometimes.

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Thomas Russell

Can anyone help me edit this story? Thanks! Sorry for the grammar errors and punctuation marks.

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