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Sunday Musings, featuring Cherie Sumner's poem titled "His Mind is a Beautiful Galaxy " , appreciated by Williamsji Maveli

Sunday Musings, featuring Cherie Sumner's poem titled "His Mind is a Beautiful Galaxy "  , appreciated by Williamsji Maveli

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  • Sunday Musings,
  • featuring Cherie Sumner's poem
  • titled "His Mind is a Beautiful Galaxy ",
  • appreciated by Williamsji Maveli

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For Sunday Musings,15th February, 2015  featuring Cherie Sumner's poem titled " His Mind is a Beautiful Galaxy "

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SYNOPSIS: This is my weekend writing column for a review of a poem from a selected author. This Column is being titled as "Sunday Musings " with a view to feature an in-depth analysis of  any one of the poems from the previous weeks postings, selected by me at random to avoid the elaborate review or comment postings  by me in the usual comments column. Poetess Cherie Sumner's   almost all poems are great success, and have won much appreciations and comments from COSMO viewers.  Hence it was very difficult to choose the best one for my review. However, I shall plan this column in such a way to accommodate almost all style of poems by all poets and poetess of COSMOFUNNEL, which I hope will give more room for encouragement and inspirations to write. The poems selected are purely from my own liking and discretion and has nothing to do with the ratings, voting and favorite aspects. Hope, readers will understand my view point and enjoy my writing. My views and interpretations in this column are purely my own observations, and it has nothing to do with the personal life of the author of the poem. I am eager to read your feed-backs.  The poem which  I have taken-up for this Sunday Musings is Poetess Cherie Sumner's  verse  titled "" His Mind is a Beautiful Galaxy "

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  • His Mind is a Beautiful Galaxy
  • By Poetess Cherie Sumner

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His Mind is a Beautiful Galaxy

His mind is a beautiful galaxy

Of celestial stars

In meditation’s grace,

He conjures colors of Renoir

An impressionistic masterpiece,

Unequivocal

Patent privilege to love

God’s gifted original

(The near side of a galaxy is tens of thousands of light-years closer to us than the far side; thus we see the front as it was tens of thousands of years before the back. But typical events in galactic dynamics occupy tens of millions of years, so the error in thinking of an image of a galaxy as frozen in one moment of time is small )

He disappears
Behind a curtain of Divinity
A metaphysical world
Within his soul’s vicinity
I dare want to follow,
As my inner essence hears his call
Begging me to enter
In a spiritual dance hall

(These lines are intensely incredible lines of a lovely verse, expressing the desire of  a soul in view of hunting for spiritual inception and to serve a unified conception of love, which is equivalent to God's own love to human)
 

Where he and I serve an endowed purpose
In the great unknown
Yet, destiny’s guiding hand
Will not abandon us alone
Both aware that we share a connection,
Divinely driven
Our passionate love burns
Beyond our physical livin’

(These lines depict the Poetess Cherie Sumner's love to his beloved (Honorable Poet Tony Taylor)  expressed so deeply, poetically as well as spiritually This seems to be a a huge bond with him  which is equally  Important to  both of them in life.)

I sense it in his kiss,
The fire in his eyes of Godly gleam
Emotional euphoria
Of twin souls riding ionic beams
Searching for God,
Ever closer in our quest combined
His mind is a beautiful galaxy,
With possibilities unconfined

Poetess Cherie Sumner carries an amazing and wonderful potentiality both personally in her writings and attitude towards life.  Her poetic expressions  are fabulous on a her spiritual path)   

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  • BETWEEN THE LINES

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My observations on the above verse are a qualitative research method to examine the multidimensional  concept  of beauty and ugliness.

 Then, I take a quantitative research technique to propose a scale to measure beauty. Based on the results from these poetic and critic thoughts, I wish to conclude that beauty concept is certainly more than skin deep and ugliness, also, has more to do with non-physical than physical characteristics. Physical attractiveness may be the initial criterion on which people evaluate beauty, or ugliness. The essential ingredient in the creation of a truly beautiful personality is related to spiritual inclinations of love to love God as well as human. The "heart" of ugliness and the part of "beauty" is relational.  The inside, in both cases, is truly much more important than the outside.

Dearest Mother Poetess of Love: Cherie Sumner, please accept my congratulations for sharing such an amazing verse to us, Keep writing more, May God bless you, Love & hugs

BY

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Hi Cherie,

Excellent, moreover very inspiring, lovely comments on my appreciation review on your poem. Sometimes when we are bombarded with so much pain and trouble, we forget how beautiful life is. We forget that the best things in life are really those that are free. Your love to Tony Taylor, my brother is celestial, true and lovely,

Love & hugs

Willy

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