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Sunday Musings, featuring Jacqueline Cain's poem titled " Your Voice " appreciated by Williamsji Maveli

Sunday Musings, featuring Jacqueline Cain's  poem titled " Your Voice    " appreciated by Williamsji Maveli

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  • Sunday Musings, featuring Jacqueline Cain's
  •  poem titled " Your Voice    "
  • appreciated by Williamsji Maveli

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  • For Sunday Musings,
  • of date 05 th April 2015  featuring Jacqueline Cain's
  • Poem titled
  •  " Your Voice "

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SYNOPSIS: This is my weekend writing column for a review of a poem from a selected author. This Column is being titled as "Sunday Musings" with a view to feature an in-depth analysis of any one of the poems from the previous week's postings, selected by me at random to avoid the elaborate review or comment postings by me in the usual comments column. Poetess  Jacqueline Cain' s almost all poems are great success, and have won much appreciations and comments from COSMO viewers.  Hence it was very difficult to choose the best one for my review. However, I shall plan this column in such a way to accommodate almost all style of poems by all poets and poetess of COSMOFUNNEL, which I hope will give more room for encouragement and inspirations to write. The poems selected are purely from my own liking and discretion and has nothing to do with the ratings, voting and favorite aspects. Hope, readers will understand my view point and enjoy my writing. My views and interpretations in this column are purely my own observations, and it has nothing to do with the personal life of the author of the poem. I am eager to read your feed-backs.  The poem which  I have taken-up for this Sunday Musings is Jacqueline Cain's poem titled " Your Voice "

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  • Your Voice
  • By
  • Jacqueline Cain

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That voice I hear when I close my eyes,
I am breathless, I sigh, I am mesmerized.
Your voice so tender it speaks to my heart,
So soft, but rugged it tears my world apart.
Oh how I wish you were here tonight
Whispering sweet poetry in the moonlight. 

(Just to say or whisper I love you never seems enough. We all might have uttered this so many times. I’m afraid you won't understand what I really mean when I say it. How so much feeling, so much adoration can possibly fit into those three little words. But until I find some other way of saying how I feel, then “I Love You” will have to do. So no matter how many times I say it, never take it lightly, this is a good love lyric, my applause)

When I hear you speak my name,
No other words could sound the same.
It's like music and passion rolled into one
My heart races, my throat goes dry, yearning
I lay down and close my eyes.

(The above stanza is fabulous. It is not about being who someone else wants you to be. It is about being completely you and finding someone who loves each and every bit of it. Someone who loves your laugh and your smile and the sound of your voice and the things you say. Someone who loves you even when you’re in a bad mood or when your face is red and puffy with tears, great love write, dear Poetess, my applause)

I feel your breath in my ear 
please say my name , draw me near. 
Take me out of this world I know
whisper to me soft and slow. As I cry
out your sweet name,  I know I
will never feel the same.....

(Only the time factor will determine when and how love affair is  going to move on. Sure, it might not be right away like you want it to be, but eventually one day you’ll wake up and realize that somewhere along the way, that intense feeling you’ve always felt inside your inner heart faded and went away while you were too busy living life to notice)

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I think love is a feeling as well as a healing for all of us. It’s that feeling you get when you know you are going to see that person. You’re always counting down the minutes, the hours, the days or even months until you will see them again because you love that feeling you have when you’re with them.

 Love is a healing of perfect contentment. Being in the  arms of a loved one  means that everything will be okay and even if it’s really not going to be, you’ll get a feeling that they’ll do whatever they can to make it be, or just to try to make you feel better. It’s that feeling that you are loved for who you are and you love them for who they are. It’s about how they are the first one you want to talk to when anything is good or bad and how you are always learning something new no matter how long you’ve been together. It’s about changing and being a new person, not necessarily changing your ways or who you are, but wanting to be different and a better person simply cause that person is in your life and you want to be everything to them.

Dear Poetess Jacqueline Cain, please accept my congratulations for sharing the above  excellent love lyric to us, may God bless your golden pen for further poems in this category, Good luck, regards & love

BY

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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NOTE:

Picture Courtesy : FB - Poetess   Jacqueline Cain

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