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Sunday Musings, featuring Lily Mae's poem titled " Unveil Me " appreciated by Williamsji Maveli

Sunday Musings, featuring Lily Mae's poem titled " Unveil Me " appreciated by Williamsji Maveli

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Sunday Musings, featuring Lily Mae's
 poem titled " Unveil Me ", appreciated  by
Williamsji Maveli

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For Sunday Musings column of  19th July,  2015 
featuring   poem titled " Unveil Me "

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SYNOPSIS: This is my weekend writing column for a review of a poem from a selected author. This Column is being titled as "Sunday Musings" with a view to feature an in-depth analysis of any one of the poems from the previous week's postings, selected by me at random to avoid the elaborate review or comment postings by me in the usual comments column. Poetess Lily Mae's poems are romantic, sensual and short, but cute and great success, and have won much appreciations and comments from COSMO viewers.  Hence it was very difficult to choose the best one for my review. However, I shall plan this column in such a way to accommodate almost all style of poems by all poets and poetess of COSMOFUNNEL, which I hope will give more room for encouragement and inspirations to write. The poems selected are purely from my own liking and discretion and has nothing to do with the ratings, voting and favorite aspects. Hope, readers will understand my view point and enjoy my writing. My views and interpretations in this column are purely my own observations, and it has nothing to do with the personal life of the author of the poem. I am eager to read your feed-backs.  The poem which I have taken-up for this Sunday is  " Unveil Me  "

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  • Unveil Me
  • By Lily Mae

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This thing between us is timeless 
our souls ink written on pale flesh 
unraveling lifetimes of ache and want 

(When life becomes an ache, then the lust should be highly romantic and arousing forever)

Simply you must know one thing 
I desire you in ways created in spaces 
called unholy 

( Love Before and  lust after, bringing and nurturing  human sex as romantic as possible)

Unveil me quickly, leaving all 
hesitation behind 
see what lies beneath with hungry eyes 

(To make sure climax happens, be sure to focus on  foreplay on bodies .Many men are of the opinion that  making their partner orgasm is the best part of sex. Now that will be the best  romantic instinct)

Sheer...delicate 
divinely yours for the taking 
surrender to my rising breath 

(The Twin flame relationship cannot be romanticized or idealized. This relationship is not about dependency or lustful desire. It is an authentic and divine love that is unconditional and beyond ego)

Free yourself inside the mystery’s 
that await you deep inside the cavern 
of the insatiable waves...timeless ebb and flow 

(Dare to lose your mind in love at least once in your life. To feel passion and desire at its peak at all times, to float above the world in a cloud of ecstasy. To surrender all gladly. To have your heart and mind race with lust)

Take the magic of this moment 
and dive into the sin 
absorbing yourself into my flame 

(One-on-one, Many people believe that  two is a  an ideal company and three is a crowd; well, three is definitely a crowd)

Write on me with pale ink 
a love letter 
under the sheer veil of my fire

 

(Love gives outward from the heart, Lust takes inward to the body)

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  • BETWEEN THE LINES

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How intense sexual attraction is dishonorable for obliterating common sense and intuition in the most sensible people. Why? Lust is an altered state of consciousness programmed by the primal urge to procreate. The brain in this phase is much like a brain on drugs. Major scanning illustrates that the same area lights up when an addict gets a fix of cocaine as when a person is experiencing the intense lust of physical attraction. Also in the early stage of a relationship, when the sex hormones are raging, lust is fueled by idealization and projection--you see what you hope someone will be or need them to be--rather than seeing the real person, flaws and all. Being in love doesn’t exclude lust. In fact, lust can lead to love. However, real love, not based on idealization or projection, requires time to get to know each other.

Honorable Poetess Lily Mae, Please accept my congratulations for sharing such a sensual, romantic poem to us, keep writing more and more,

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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