The Camping Trip (18+)
We are camping. Somewhere in New York. It's actually pretty, calm, and quiet. I don't honestly care where we are as long as I am with him... my man... my everything. The sun is going down, the crescent moon is starting to glow. Soon the night sky will fall. Thousands of stars filling the dark clouded skies. The air is getting a little bit chilly, my nose starts to run and water. I blow my nose on the softest Kleenex's ever!! Puffs. ("Quick funny thought, puffs. "lol"".) After I'm done I sanitize my hands. There's a fire slowly burning in front of our tent a couple feet away. (Another quick funny thought, a couple feet away!!"") I find it funny because I don't have a couple of feet, anymore. ("Oh my, I'm literally laughing out loud. these inside jokes are becoming terrible. Hilarious, But terrible."") I gain my composure and get a smirk on my face. I slide my legs open while sitting on this lawn chair, in the middle of the dead night. I clear my throat and say to him, ("I want you to pretend that you are a firefighter, and put out... My fire!!") He's not paying any attention to me and it's getting me a little bit upset. ("He's too busy preoccupied, watching his Storage War T.V. show... blah blah blah. Quick random thought.""} ("These random thoughts are becoming a little bit too much for me. But oh well, It's part of who I am. A complete nutcase. Laughing out loud. again, to myself."} Anyways, I snap out of that weird zone I was in, I'm a little bit stoned to be honest. Not off of anything but the lovely marijuana. My girl, "MS. Mary Jane!". ("I'm focused trying to figure out how to get my Daddy's attention.") I ask myself that a couple of times. I'm drooling while staring at this sexy hunk sitting across from me. Facing the view of this gorgeous lake we found by mistake. I still don't know what he does, if anything that just drives me absolutely crazy about him. But then as I am imagining something, I find myself actually acting it out too. I lay my legs down flat. Barely taking up all the space of my lawn chair. There's still plenty of room for him to join me. I'm now touching myself at this point of the real imagination. Rubbing my clit, switching between soft slow strokes, and fast hard strokes. i begin to faintly moan.. Few minutes go by and now I'm moaning even louder, and louder. All of a sudden, I hear his phone go quiet. I look across the way to see him getting up out of the chair he's making creek and shriek because of him being so tall, and the fact that his chair is sitting on some old, cold, crunchy fallen leaves. He's now sitting at the end of my lawn chair. He confesses ("I heard what you said. I just ignored you to get you irritated enough to get the night started, properly."") We both sit there laughing a little too hard and a little bit too loud. He's opening my legs again, after I just had closed them because we were laughing, He's got them wide open, staring at my pussy. I'm starting to blush. I can't hide it; it feels so good to be loved right. He then asks me, ("Do you really want me to put your fire out?") My breathing instantly gets heavier. I start to pace my breathing when I realize that he's not even touching me yet. After I've collected myself, I open my eyes and respond to him with, ("Please Daddy put out my fire. It's burning out of control for you.") He smiles. Then he takes his hands and spreads my pussy open. He starts sucking on my hard throbbing clit, rapidly. My hands are roaming wildly in his hair. it feels too good. I grab his hair and shove his face further inside the middle of the paradise that lies between my thighs. He makes that deep grunting or groaning noise that he does and it drives me over the edge. i orgasm all over his face. We're both really shocked at the present moment. I never used to orgasm so quickly. The poor hunk didn't even get to enjoy himself. ("Quick funny thought, I can't allow this man to suffer like that. No blue balls on my watch!!") I can't deal with myself. I then softly say to him, ("Daddy, I'm so sorry, I don't know why that happened, or what even happened.") He just smiles, again. He's surprisingly still very hard and erect. He decides to start crawling over me. For some odd reason, I'm a little nervous. i still can't believe this is all happening to me, TO ME!! He's got his hard cock rubbing against my pussy. He knows it's one of the few things that actually drives me over the edge. i don't understand why he's trying to make me orgasm so quickly again. But he's still going. My hands are rubbing up and down his back. Now my nails are digging lightly into his skin as he shoves that thick head of his cock inside my tight little pussy. I am in heaven or this is just pure bliss. I don't know. ("Quick random thought, i don't know why I don't quote all of my thoughts. Giggling, to myself, as usual.") I start to moan, but then he starts going faster and deeper with every thrust. I wrap my legs around his waist and hold him still, still inside me. He's growling. Angrily, because he knows I just delayed myself from orgasming again so quickly. I blink innocently and look up into his sky blue eyes and whisper to him, ("Daddy, please don't be mad at me for that. I just want to make sure you get to enjoy yourself also. I love it when we climax together.") Before he could respond we both stop suddenly in the midst of some fog that appeared out of nowhere. His massive cock is still deep inside my middle box. Neither one of us really know what is going on but we're supposed to be non-interrupted by anything!! That was the purpose of this camping trip!! NO DISTURBANCES!! He's a little bit frustrated now. He roughly flips me over, so now I'm on all four. I don't have a clue what to expect, or if he's going to eventually even say anything back to me. Out of complete awkward silence we hear a coyote howling. Instead of us stopping what we were about to be doing, he shoves his cock into my ass!! I make my own kind of howling noise. He seemed to like it. He grabs my ass as he's sliding in and out, touching the wall of my anus. He yells out to me ("Yes baby, Yes!!, Howl louder than that coyote! Let's show it who really owns these woods!") I obey. I howl louder, and louder, and longer with every thrust he gives me, not skipping a beat. My heart is about ready to beat out of my chest bone. I'm starting to actually pant now! We both must be feeling the same thing because we both yell out together, at the same exact time, (" BABY, I'M CUMMING!!") I feel my asshole dripping the extra fluid out. Slowly, but at a steady pace. He smacks my ass a couple more times, and then walks away smiling as he goes and cleans himself up. I eventually join him in the lake, the water is warm. I feel so peaceful and giddy inside. I'm truly happy. As the sun is about to come up, both of us losing time, and sleep, we laugh because we're not usually like this. Night owls. ("Quick random thought, "Well that's what people say; We'll show them!") We share a passionate kiss as he's floating me on top of his lap. The coolness of the waves washing the warmth of the actual lake's crystal-clear water over our bodies. We both get lost staring into each other's eyes'. We can't help but feel so in love. My fire, for once, has stopped burning. I finally found my firefighter. I finally found my soulmate.Â
Stephanie Davis
December 2023
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If this piece were a wine I'd get hints of a modern day female William Burroughs: There's just so much to say.
From a literary perspective I love way the narrator evokes the image of the stars and the night and basic surroundings, seemingly like a child writing it's first poem, with no inner life of it's own, only to blast into fast paced rapidness of a devouring adult world! But on the smaller scale, too, details like a contrasting lawn chair, you associate with the day time, placed in the night environment, and the reference to sanitizing your hands, a COVID precaution, defining the times. The reoccurring Steve King like bits scattered throughout of the inner world dialogue separates the goingons between the real and the abstract, I liked that especially! Could easily be a penthouse read, no doubt. Do they still have penthouse? It's a mistake to ignore the talent showcased in this. I liked it.Â
Wow. I'm honestly speechless!! Thank you so much for everything! Your feedback is absolutely amazing. I'm forever thankful for the time and consideration it took for you to not only read this piece that I wrote, but for your kind review. Thank you again, so much. Comparing it to so many different people and things, really makes me feel good about myself and my talent. So again, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. â¤ď¸â¤ď¸