Poem -
Disenchanted
Fading shadow of who I use to be
Β I cannot exist if youβve no faith in me
Roaming realms in tattered mist
Tis such woe to be dismissed
Feeding on angst and fear
Thatβs what kept me so near
Famished tis emptiness
Acid reflux I must confess
Inferno in bowels of hell
Blackout with disenchanted spell
Belching brimstone gas
Unsure of when Iβll pass.
Iβll just rest here and close my eyes.
On Windfall just ignore my cries
Born anew in oneβs nightmare.
I shall haunt you everywhere.
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Comments
Hi Lisa
I really enjoyed this one,
Could feel the darkened cave
brilliantly done
Lorna x
thanks Lorna
A riviting write with such emphatic imagery your turn of phase id quite enthralling. "Feeding on angst and fear" this line did make me ponder on the use of the german word angst.
Thank you
Wonderful write .you have a great gift . Bradford . I love your rhymes:)Β
Thank you!
Strange to come across this as I had a large dragon figurine that I loved and I accidently broke it yesterday. Dragons are mythical yet they have been written about since the beginning of time and play a huge role in the mythology of so many ancient cultures and are still powerful figures in modern cultures today. Fascinating stuff. Great write Lisa x
Thanks MarionΒ
Your usual grand effort!
JP
Thanks John
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Thanks Sharon
You're very welcome, and thank you. I love it
*blushing smile*