Poem - 05 March 2024, 02:35 On Waking Up in Rio Neville When we eventually woke up in Rio, my hands felt too big and my feet looked so very small .. Until I lifted my head and I realised .. We had somehow fallen asleep on the way, top to toe .. Â Like 3 Pin it 1 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 582 Rating: Total votes: 4 Tags: Holidays Love Passion Sleep Poetry Genre: Freestyle Topic: Pleasure Listed in: Contest Entries 4 comments
Marion07 March 2024, 14:05 I had a vivid picture of this in my mind...what a poetic way to.describe ...a tangle...brilliant x Reply
Neville15 April 2024, 00:58 thank you Tina .. just wish you had been there too .. would like to think I may have had you in knots x Reply
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I had a vivid picture of this in my mind...what a poetic way to.describe ...a tangle...brilliant x
Bless ya .. Just wish you had been there M x
What a lovely tangle! Â
thank you Tina .. just wish you had been there too .. would like to think I may have had you in knots x