Poem -

The fishing day out

The damn body! always needs to be touched.
Skin, one big exposed nerve, the air hurting it.

I'm in an oven, or the Antarctic. I have no control 

Over destinations. I could never prescribe to them.

I want to always be moving. I'm in need of hearing 

Quiet on Baynes Street. 

 

Further along the peninsula is a better beach 

With a park. Jealous I don't live there I get on a bus.

There are better trees than ours and the water, 

Less flat. It sounds pretentious to me that 

I remember even the grass looks greener. 

I'm not really on the other side just nearer 

 

To where there is a jetty to fish off of. 

I take a friend and I show him how to use the 

   sinkers.

We make use of the good weather. I should come 

More often, I really shouldn't bitch about nothing.

But the friend is gone now and I don't get out as

   much.

We never caught one fish between us.

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Shirley Harrison

Awe you nearly made me cry, your wonderful reflection truly your gift in how you write, love everything about this so descriptive from the beginning to end, memories can be everything and thank you for sharing yours. 🌹 

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Being Me

It's often more about the company than the pastime. Brilliant poem x

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Marion

This really is like taking a walk in the thoughts of the narrator. I also got sad. And...perfect last line R x

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