I like the separation, at least as I see it, of the hand and the heart. The former can give what might be tokens representing love but only the latter can truly give love. But as you say in your poem the meaning behind what the hand gives remains in the heart until the heart gives it freely.Ā
And I love your closing two words like love is more than just a feeling, it is a force of nature.Ā
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I like the separation, at least as I see it, of the hand and the heart. The former can give what might be tokens representing love but only the latter can truly give love. But as you say in your poem the meaning behind what the hand gives remains in the heart until the heart gives it freely.Ā
And I love your closing two words like love is more than just a feeling, it is a force of nature.Ā
Itās a force of nature, indeed.
Excellent reflections here, Bernie. Very, very much appreciated.Ā
Stay well. Ā BĀ
Hey you are very welcome Bernadette. Stay well too. B
Love is a winding road. Live life day to day. Nice Poem.
Good advice. Yes, we shall always remember leaving life day to day. You are a good example of this, Jac.Ā
All the best,
BernadeteĀ
Ian, thank you!
Warm wishes,
Bernadete