Poem - 21 October 2025, 15:47

making nevermind

can make yourself a heaven
when hellbent on finding god

hold your soul up to the reaper
when you're fixed to find a god

pay a threepence to the priestman
won't make no nevermind

if you can't convince your own self
that a god you'll ever find

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Rory McGinlay21 October 2025, 18:45

The last half of the lines I like the best. Anger in this, not subtle

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Neville22 October 2025, 02:44

Just remember .. You are not alone .. No kidding .. Neville x

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Bernadete van d...23 October 2025, 02:32

Letting it out, the beauty of poetry. B

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