Poem -

Dawn is nearly here

Dawn is nearly here

Hesitantly, in the dark, I touch
wood? Pushing, it slowly moves,
one still side and one turns away…

I realise it is a door, never locked or fully
closed. I step
over the threshold into a dark hall,
but feel

the house welcomes me
(a whisper from the left ”are you
with me?” From the right a scream:
“Mine ! “ – out of five doors (a candle has
been lit in the meanwhile)
two of me stare/glare at me.

A hall opening to world behind me,
five rooms around (in one someone is
loudly fast asleep).

An instinct to run is stiffled,
turns into my name and a sixfold
“Yes?”

I was scattered, unconnected eyes peering out
into the darkness.
Just standing here, breathing, I watch
a chair growing out of my breath in hall’s middle and I sit,
silent, eyes closed, listening, feeling
all doors open now, widely, welcome,
rogue me’s seeking centre.

The house is telling us, you all belong here,
in my hall.

Be one (as you are), riding the rhythm.

Light some sage and sit as one
in my chair,
see, dawn is nearly here…
 

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Jaco

The Dawn is the best part of the Day. I am always awake at this time to see the sunrise. Nice Verse.

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John Loopstra

Hi, Jaco, aye the dawn is good, means new chances are ready to be found... Alas, most days I just scatter parts of me all over again... 🤣

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Shaun Cronick

John it feels like tread lightly and softly to venture slowly.
Get the vibe of for want of a better choice of words- the vibe of an out of body experience, that of one's spirit exploring or wayfaring in a dreamworld.
Superbly crafted and full honors to you  for doing so.
Shaun 

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John Loopstra

Hi, Shaun, thank you for getting the drift. I daily scatter several aspects of me all over the place (too much work, too much compassion, too much pain still...) so I should daily meditate to get all the parts back together... It keeps me sane and improves menatal heath. After 65 years I am beginning to u8nderstand the scope of it,  about damn time I'd say 🤣

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