Pastel
amethyst yellow
skies ..
Filled to overflow
with the
silhouettes
of gold eyed birds
in flight ..
I must make notes ..
For surely,
winter is only just
around,
the very next corner ..
Β
Dear Neville, when a simple observation captures mind and heart, the words that follow can be mind-blowing brilliant when written with skill. You depict here such beauty and the words weaved with your poetic finesse makes for a beautiful, beautiful poem. Well observed and very well written x
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Dear Neville, when a simple observation captures mind and heart, the words that follow can be mind-blowing brilliant when written with skill. You depict here such beauty and the words weaved with your poetic finesse makes for a beautiful, beautiful poem. Well observed and very well written x
Thank you so much Tina, x
Beautiful Nev...words inked in a moment of complete awareness and oneness with the cosmos...hope you had a glass in hand also π x
Many thank our M .. I really can't remember .. so I guess I probably did :) x
You had me hooked on the first stanza. well done awesome read
Many thanks PD am struggling with my PC so please excuse my brevity .. NΒ
cooling write Nev!.....................................................................................Jim
Thanks Jim, much appreciated my friend. Hope you are well sir ππΒ
I FEEL THE SAME WAY LINDA GREAT WRITE.
How very kind LINDA, thank you :)Β