Poem -
This is Us ..
Your pain my
love
quite simply
hurts me
far too much ..
I can not
bear to feel
you suffer so ..
When
you burn,
I do blister
and when you
bleed
my heart,
then
I bleed too ..
Indeed,
this ache we
share is
all consuming ..
Who
passes first
I fear,
shall never
let the other go ..
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Comments
Sounds like love to me... that connection ..you hurt when they hurt
and when they're happy, you have joy
the end made me think of my parents
My dad is still here, but my mam is with us in spiritÂ
I really enjoyed this
Lorna xx
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Thank you Lorna, I wanted to get this particular little scribble off my chest and into open for quite some time .. the inspiration had been around seemingly forever, but the full ingredients eluded me until yesterday evening .. Say hi to your ma when you next see her Pet and thanks again x
This is just soooo powerful! It speaks to me of a couple who have lived and loved for a lifetime. Love is strong x
You got it .. bless you from top to toe and all ya bits between Tina, Neville x
I think.it has all been said above Nev so I'll just leave a vote and pin for excellence
not many can put into words the true 'essence' of love đź’•
Bless you M and for the umpteenth time truly xx