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Long to go

Remember to breathe.
Feel yourself being an organism.

Be exactly however you are,

So long as you don't hurt anybody.

That might even include being kind to yourself,

If you are wise enough.

So this is what it's like being human?

This is the big strip tease?

How to conquer the ego?

Remember to breathe.

There is simply never long to go now.

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sparrowsong

Hello Rory...

​​​​​​Satan's out pouting again...

I told him to go find his friends so he'll be happy again...

There's lots and lots of them...

I don't why he likes trying to bug me...

​​​​​​He's mad because, I'm at the spot where he can't come onto my path anymore...

He said...

A Bad Saturday...

He tried to kill me yesterday again...

Not only I didn't get hurt but, I came out of it dancing and spinning...

He thought because, I was in the shower I was easy prey...

​​​​​​He was very mad yesterday and he was definitely more mad today...

The day hasn't really even started yet here...

​​​Hopefully, he'll calm down after kicking a few more rocks and kicking up dirt...

Breathe...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

 

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Marion

I think this is fairly correct observation.
Remeber to breathe...being the punch line?
Seriously good R x

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Neville

Great concept & poem but I do believe in this case, memory becomes obsolete because the mechanism involved is down to the pneumotaxic nerve centre which lives in the pons vareola of the medulla oblongata :)

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