Poem -
Amaterasu
A view, through evening mist
is perhaps
the kindest time of day to look
at her and see
what might otherwise be more
than her beauty ..
Just add a touch of candlelight
to catch a glimpse
of transient perfection, indeed,
the rim around
her halo shines brightest when
I close my eyes
tightly to take, all her radiance in ..
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Sounds etherealÂ
S'real enough .. you only need look up to the sky .. CheersÂ
Why do I keep thinking of the moon? I read this and the moon ...she is there in my head. Awesome write, even if my thoughts are wrong x
You are close but she is much further away and shines brighter .. bless you Tina x
Ah ...Hemera? Or maybe you prefer her other names xx
I don't think she really minds which of several names she is referred by, after all, everyone knows her .. Hemera works just as well for me .. thanks Tina, my little ray of sunshine x
We have a Bhuddist Temple not far from my home. A great visit for a day trip. http://en.nanhuatemple.org/ They have a small museum with artifacts from the Far East as well.Â
AÂ Nice Verse.
That's really cool Jacques .. I personally follow a Buddhist path that leans in favour of Kongo Zen .. NevilleÂ
Any ray of light is fine by me... a lovely write Neville x
The trick is to see it first ................. and then to remember, while it may only be the tiniest speck, it can travel either way and so bloomin fast ..
Bless you my very dear Marion .. Neville x