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The room filled with laughter 
Each smile looked a mile wide
As voices chirped in banter...

So why did I feel dead inside ? 

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Greg Etsell

Wonderful poem
interesting as well
do you have an app on your phone
that you can track satellites
In the sky I know there’s one Apple phone has it I had it on my phone For a while looking up satellites in the sky at night and early in the morning very fun

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Gwendoline

Awe greg thank you my friend for liking and pinning my poem. 

I didn’t know about that but I am going to find an app and get back to you. I use to have my computer linked to NASA who were asking for people to help filter the sounds in space, as they looked for intelligence. That was always fun to do 😊

Hope you are well my friend x

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Greg Etsell

Also watching nova last night
talking about Saturn and a satellite that went there passing through all over that planet
There is water on the planet and lots of it

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Gwendoline

Wow that’s so exciting greg ! I wonder what’s in the water? There might be small organisms at the very least. Did they say if the water was frozen ? 

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Greg Etsell

If you want you can go to and if you have the time go to YouTube look up nova and Saturn and it will be there It’s a great show

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Gwendoline

I will definitely look it up. Thanks Greg for the heads up x

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Greg Etsell

Don’t go do YouTube and look it up
look it up online nova PBS planet Saturn and it will come up as a video Because it’s not on YouTube look it up online ok

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Gwendoline

Thanks my friend I will google it :)

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Neville

I know the answer don't we Gwen 🌻

Do you know wot, I would have given one of my eye teeth to have writ this little belter .. and no kiddin ..x 

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Gwendoline

Neville, thank you so much my friend. Your words are always so kind and generous. You are such a joy to have on this here site ⭐️
Gwen  x 

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Marion

Just....💖💖💖

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Tony Taylor

Friggin'  BRILLIANT!!......,..smokin' grooves Miss Gwendoline!! Smokin' grooves!..........depression...sucks!!.......and this subject is BEAUTIFULLY  expressed here!!............PINNED for perfection!!....Out!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!,,,,,,,T xo  

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Gwendoline

Thanks my good friend, for your kindness and friendship x

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Wilford Barker

Those damn feelings..
They can turn your day upside down in seconds.
Keep looking up Gwendoline.. It gets better with time.
Pinned for a return read.

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Gwendoline

Thanks Wilford for leaving your kind words with this piece x 

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Yiyan Han

Alone in a crowd ... as I often as well, not lonely. Regards

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Gwendoline

Thanks for your insightful comment Yiyan. This is about the effects of trauma not particularly about being alone but being numb x

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