Poem -
.
I can't catch my breath
This is worse than death
Eating through my soul
Stress taking a toll
My chest
is caving in
I can't breathe
Left a gaping whole
Physical
And
Mental
I lost control
WILD animal
I can't comprehend
How long til this will mend
All I feel is pain
Fleeting bursts of shame
Lucky and alive
Struggling to survive
Heart breaking
Earth shaking
Life taking
Penetrating
Support CosmoFunnel.com
You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.
Comments
Keep writing, it can only help. You’ve been missed on here, sorry things are tough. These feelings are all so familiar, there’s always light at the end of the tunnel.
I needed more time with you in this place
Needed more time with your earthly grace
It doesn't feel right without you in my space
Everything is wrong without your face
Why did you have to end it this way
I couldn't be with you at the end to say
How much you meant to me each day
I forgive you, forever my love will stay
I can't even be angry I miss you so much
But the anger I feel inside isn't such
As heavy as the sadness I feel in my heart
I was there with you from the start
Though it wasn't me that left you that day
My life ended there and then too in a way
I miss you I love you I know that somewhere
You are still with me my big baby bear
Awe , this bleeds out so much raw emotion and feelings. Your ability to have such strong rhyme scheme makes your poetry addicting to read. I’m glad to see you writing on here again.