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21st Century Survival Kit

She trod the road with a few
By her side
No map, no guide
No destination in mind

Chaos,Despair and Apathy
Each a distinct demeanour,

This World; the perfect neighbourhood
To raise them

With every cue
They grew

“A treacherous lot”
Were the whispers aloud

Three’s a bunch, they said
Wait till the fourth is born

Indifferent she continued,
Unapologetic her ways

Imagination kept her company
Reality reeked of jealousy

Soon came the daunting hour
The nest, empty thereafter

Somewhere at a distance,
Loneliness wailed its first cry

Immune by now
She knew just the tone
To put it to sleep,
All by herself
All alone.

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Nine Eleven

Great poem Jay, "imagination kept her company". Brilliant line, I love it, imagination I'm sure keeps us all company at some time or another. Welcome to cosmo. 

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jaybird3001

Exactly. Especially when your mind has nowhere else to wander off to. Thanks for appreciating the work! 

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Richard Waters

Established criteria indicate manifestations of dependency running through this work contradicting generally accepted themes.
Nicely written.
Good development strategy.
All the best to you in your endeavours.
:)

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Dean Kuch

Hello, Jaybird and welcome to Cosmo.
Excellent poetic social commentary.
My Grandma Cook always used to say, "Folks need to sweep the dirt off of their own back porch before they go pointin' out how dirty someone else's is."
I'm not entirely sure what she meant by that (I never took the time to ask), but I believe she meant that people should mind their own business and not go around gossiping.
Again, well penned.
Enjoy your time here.
~Dean Kuch ...?️                                                                                                  
 

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?POETRYDELIVERY

Hi Jaybird☺  ..l..let me firsr say welcone poet sister. Here at Cosmofunnel.. 
??im practicly also new☺. 
now wow that is a very bad as poem
awesome.. A treacherous lot" 
Where the whispers aloud!  That did it for me... although sad . of how my lost just by her... Very unique subject you touched. Thank for sharing?☺?????
????poetrydelivery?®

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