Poem - 25 February 2024, 01:39 575 Neville I know I still am because it hurts me so much I just dare not look Like 6 Pin it 3 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 637 Rating: Total votes: 6 Tags: Anguish Blind Pain Reality Poetry Genre: Haiku Topic: Reality Listed in: Contest Entries 10 comments
Marion25 February 2024, 03:06 Powerful lines lines Nev, and terrifying when read between...are you ok? X Reply
Neville25 February 2024, 12:04 I am fine .. which is much better than the weather .. No worries our M .. ta :) Reply
sparrowsong25 February 2024, 05:24 Hello Nev... Clowns to the left of me Joker to the right... Here I am stuck in the middle? Keep going.. Fly when you need to... Mystery and sad write! I hope you are well too my friend... Best wishes and blessings... sparrowsong Reply
Kristin Gudbjar...25 February 2024, 08:53 great haiku, loved it and a lot to think about, hope your doing ok Reply
Neville25 February 2024, 11:56 You a far too kind Kristin .. thank you my friend & truly .. Neville Reply
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An extra star for technicality
Thanks Rory, I shall wear it with pride .. Neville
Powerful lines lines Nev, and terrifying when read between...are you ok? X
I am fine .. which is much better than the weather .. No worries our M .. ta :)
5+7+5, so still 17? in a good way.
10/10 .. :)
Hello Nev...
Clowns to the left of me Joker to the right...
Here I am stuck in the middle?
Keep going..
Fly when you need to...
Mystery and sad write!
I hope you are well too my friend...
Best wishes and blessings...
sparrowsong
Cheers .. I am fine .. I sincerely hope you are too .. Neville
great haiku, loved it and a lot to think about, hope your doing ok
You a far too kind Kristin .. thank you my friend & truly .. Neville