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A Beautiful Thought

A Beautiful Thought

( A Picture Challenge )

As I stare into the void
At ideas with which I've only toyed
I've come to the staggering realization 
I have had to imprison my imagination
But being bound doesn't keep her in
Her essence and presence keep on reaching
I cannot contain her prowess
My innermost thoughts take the form of a goddess
She is the shape of a women because she encompasses the beauty in me
She is naked do to the fact we are all born care free
Surrounded by lights my original ideas
Encasing my thoughts, a magnificent galleria  
Although I've chained her down
The energy of my mind flows into the ground
And reaches far off into the skyline
Proven the best words I've yet to find
This snapshot into my super charged grey matter
Caused me to look in and find her
And now I'm aware of the form that she takes
I will hold her hand and transcend the space
And surf upon the waves of my deep creative ocean
What a beautiful thought , what a great notion 

By LukeCoomer (c)

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Tony Taylor

Hey LUKE!!.... this has flow brother!!.... felt like I was reading an EMINEM rhyme!!.... did this just flow right off of the the top of your head!?.......VERY cool....... sounded like a so g my friend......ALL STARS!!!...... enjoyed........T xo.  ?

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Luke Coomer

Tony 

yes this was all off the top of my head inspired by the picture a friend sent to me as a challenge 

thanks I do love it

and your praise

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Luke Coomer

Cherie 

like I said it was a picture challenge but I absolutely was using imagination as motivation to construct my creation of this revaluation in a time constraining situation haha

but yes I let my imagination take the form of a women thanks for reading

i will keep trying to impress

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RRG (Rebecca)

Oh I love picture Challenges. The image is very interesting. I love where your imagination went and how you envisioned her free, but bound to you. Very compelling write. Truly enjoyed. Hug and Blessings, Rebecca

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Luke Coomer

Thank you Rebecca 

i love picture challenges and reaching people thanks for reading 

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Deborah Evans

Hi Luke Great write I think you described the 
picture with great imagination creating a great story
Enjoyed lots 
Best wishes Debs 

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Luke Coomer

Hi deb 

I'm so glad you enjoyed and I hope to continue to impress you

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