Poem -

A Broken Heart

This empty vessel
of faded flowers
and broken stars,
holds fast in the void
between every heartbeat,
all the years choking grief
and unhealed scars.
Forged by the flow
of love´s blood and ill,
across the realms of time
until the heart is still.

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Icarus Flocke

This is very well done and I am
admittedly surprised no one has
commented on it before now.

it has a very subtle lyricism to 
it, and while it consists of sorrowful
subject matter, it's beautifully
expressed.

well done man.

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author
Tony Owen

Hi Icarus. Thank you for commenting on my poem, I very much appreciate your positive feedback, it really means a lot. Thank you.

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author
Icarus Flocke

you're most welcome sir.
i anticipate reading more
from you.

 

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