Poem -
A Broken Heart
This empty vessel
of faded flowers
and broken stars,
holds fast in the void
between every heartbeat,
all the years choking grief
and unhealed scars.
Forged by the flow
of love´s blood and ill,
across the realms of time
until the heart is still.
Comments
This is very well done and I am
admittedly surprised no one has
commented on it before now.
it has a very subtle lyricism toÂ
it, and while it consists of sorrowful
subject matter, it's beautifully
expressed.
well done man.
Hi Icarus. Thank you for commenting on my poem, I very much appreciate your positive feedback, it really means a lot. Thank you.
you're most welcome sir.
i anticipate reading more
from you.
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