A Broken Rose
Today I saw a broken rose,
It's petals all torn and brown,
The colour had faded from the flower,
It's head could only face down.
The rain it came and drowned the plant,
Hitting hard with every drop,
The stem is bent over very low,
But the rain it did not stop.
The wind was blowing very fast,
The petals breaking free,
The last of this flower holding on tight,
To earth, to soil, save me,
At last the rose had fallen,
Not one petal or leaf remains,
For what this little rose endured,
What strength it did contain,
A year will pass and Spring will come,
As nature starts again,
And through the soil sprouting up,
A seedling grows again.
It's not the battle of the rose,
Nor beatings it received,
It's the strength it carried throughout its life,
It's purpose it believed.
At times when things are getting tough,
And things are looking bad,
Just remember things will start a new,
Like rose or Lilly pad.
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Hey LUCY!!.....a lovely début piece..... great sense of rhythm and timing in your delivery...... and a VERY compelling message interwoven here......ALL STARS!!.... well done...... and WELCOME to COSMO!!....LOVE and ROCKETS!!....T xo ?☀✴✳
Hi Tony, thank you for reading and rating my poem. It's really appreciated. I hope that this message reaches those who need it. Thank you again xx❤️
Hi, I came across this picture a year ago and I believe it completely reflects the poem. Thank you xx ?
Lovely powerful write Lucy, thanks for sharing such an amazing piece. Welcome to cosmofunnel. Warm regards.
Thank you very much! Xx
very uplifting poem linda
Thank you Linda xx
Wow this is great!! I love the flow and use of symbolize. The last stanza really ties everything together nicely :) xoxo Eden
Hi Eden, what a pretty name! Thank you so much for your lovely comments xxx
A Lovely poem.. I can relate to this####
Congrats on your great win!!!
Hi Leah, thank you so much. It is honestly so appreciated xxx
Lovely poem,well done.
John
Thank you John ☺️ X
I adored this so much after what a beautiful poem with a very fluid flow, great imagery and beginning middle and end I love it! Congratulations contest winner!!
Thank you xxx ?
Congratulations.
J ;)
Thanks J! Xx
Great work, really intriguing and most certainly makes you want to read more. Keep up the good work.
Thank you Rosella! ☺️ Xx