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A CHRISTMAS LIE

A CHRISTMAS LIE

Once a year Christmas comes around 
Excited children run around 
Play with the snow that fell on the ground 
Their laughs and jeers a welcome sound 
And on the floor presents resound 

Rose red bows tied on gifts overnight 
Labelled to the joys of your life 
Stockings hang under flickering light 
Entombed in the fires glow 
When you turn off the light 

Yay it’s Christmas day 
Time to wipe the sleep from those weary eyes 
Run downstairs 
To get your big surprise 
Then wipe the tears of joy from your eyes 
So many presents 
An overwhelming sight , to delight 
To the presents delivered to your room overnight 
Didn’t seem that long since you’d said goodnight 
Laid in your bed 
Sleep you tried to fight 
Now a mass of presents cover the seat 
you sat in last night 

How did everything magically appear over night? 
How did they know what you wanted?
You wrote a letter
No one ever responded 
Didn’t this make you wonder?

Ten years on from when this story begun 
Your hopes and dreams are shattered  
But what’s it matter
You’ve been lied too for years and years 
Santa’s not real 
I hear you squeal 
So what’s the big deal?

Is it right to kiss your child at night 
Tell them Santa’s coming as you turn off the light 
Give  them false hopes and dreams 
As you  run runabout until you run out of steam 
Gathering all the presents in the house
 Take them downstairs
Place them under the tree 
There is no santa 
Just mummy and daddy 
Don’t you think your child would still feel happy
With the truth, not this notion of figmentation? 

You teach your children not to lie 
But what do you do 
You turn the truth into a lie
By telling them 
Each and every year 
Here comes santa 
Listen for his jolly laugh 
Listen for the reindeer that will never cross your path 
And when your older and you are told the truth 
Your childhood that you once remembered
Goes up in cinders 
And santa is no longer a memory that lingers
Just a fabrication 
Of what you were told 
To boost your imagination
When you were younger   
 

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Yes Jeff there is a Santa he may not be a jolly old fella but he is the amalgamation of you imagination. He is in the hearts of all who give at Christmas. to those that buy extra gifts and put them in toys for tots. or the ones that put extra money in the offering basket in church. Santa isn't a person but in the hearts of all that wish he was. a wonderful well written piece Jeff.

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J A Overton

lol your not getting the meaning. to be told something exists for years and years then have your childhood crushed isnt fair lol. i know how i felt when i found out santa didnt come down the chimney and mum and dad portrayed santa. i found out at the age of six santa wasnt real when i caught my parents bringing the gifts from a secret hiding place upstairs lol 

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Jeff Your poem is good well written
But i have to totally agree with Lisa :-)
I know what your saying but Christmas is such a magical 
time for children i see no harm in letting them believe in Santa 
I believed until i was 9 in him, my children the same age,
and still even knowing at 9 i used to think perhaps
Santa still came and left  just one special present just from him I was`nt affected badly
by knowing the truth 
I think if it was taken as a horrible lie  by children why would that child you lied to
still hold the tradition with their own children and their children and their children
As Lisa said  there is a Santa  in the imagination of all But i guess we all have our own opinion
and that`s fine:-)
Great write  
Best wishes Debs 
 
 

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RRG (Rebecca)

Hey Jeff. :) I was never allowed to believe in Santa and ruined a few friends Christmas when I told them the truth. Of course they didn't believe me, lol, but their folks got mad at me for trying. I'm still iffy on the whole issue myself because Santa does exist on some level. He doesn't arrive with gifts, but he is the embodiment of the selfless giving spirit. Great write my friend. :) Rebecca

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Paula Lee Perry

Hey... just me...good point in your poem. Glad I read it. As for me, I was raised on the truth of CHRISTmas. I never felt I missed out on a thing. My friends always wanted to be at our home on the holidays, as did all family and neighbors dropping in. So funny -we were poor, but had more love, fun and excitement and company- at our place than anyone around!...yet they all taught Santa Clause. our home was quite different. I was blessed to have such memories. We also had a tree -under the tree Mother placed a manger scene (to remind us of the best gift of all....JESUS) presents , the works...but knew truth on who the presents were from. My mother always said Satan and Santa were the same. (Same letters just scrambled!)She said and he loves to get his claws(Clause) in our children if he can! It is the world's way of taking away from the truth of Christmas ....Jesus birth. I agree with she and Dad. On Christmas eve we all gathered around Mom, Bible open on her lap and she would read us the Christmas story from LUKE Chapter 2 KJV. Then, we would all go to bed. I know I won't receive the popular vote on this comment I'm sure. Some may even get mad. But, that's o.k. I know the truth. JESUS. I would not want to be without him.  I enjoyed the truth that came out in your poetry....Have a blessed week.....and thank you......for telling the truth. I am sorry you went through that.     Paula

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Krystyn Hertzog

that was well said paula i never even new satan and santa were alike until you pointed it out thank you i might just go home and read that chapter of LUKE.

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Paula Lee Perry

Ah! Thank you....glad I helped!    Take care    Paula

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