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A Formal Study of Her Knees

A Formal Study of Her Knees

In the sun like that
He couldn’t help but marvel
At the way
They both seemed to glow
Like early morning alabaster
And later
More like twin bronze patinas  
A smile then did form
As he took
His first sip of breakfast coffee
And watched her place
A tiny drop of sun cream
To the fore and aft and crown

Of those perfect knees of hers
And just to rub it in
He did then swear she had
The most amazing patella’s ever ..

 

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Neville

Cheers Greg :)

and AGT's to you kind sir

​​​​​​​Neville 

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Gwendoline

Hello Neville, This is a wonderful observation of a perfect set of knees :) I loved the imagery that you formed for the reader here 
Gwen x 

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Neville

Thanking you kindly our Gwen, as always x

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Marion

Wow...only you could write such beautiful poetry about knees...but it's more that that isn't it...it's about the cat who's got the cream and is thoroughly enjoying the luxury of it all...Great write x

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Neville

.. Just in case anyone else pops in, she can read me like a book folks & my word, how he loves it when she does ......................... 
 
Thank you for reading into me our Marion, your visits are always so very welcome & equally very much appreciated too ......... Neville x

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Marion

Ha...you're not so hard to read Nev, you're a man after all lol...and that is meant as a compliment not an insult, it is a pure joy to read the writings of a man appraising a woman with such complimentary and appreciative eyes my friend ...hugs X

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Neville

Ha .. when it comes to being compared to approximately half the worlds entire population, give or take a few hundred million of course aint such a bad thing when it comes from you our Marion x

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Marion

😆😆😆😀...off to bed now...nicely anaesthetised after nights so all good. Hope you have a very good day X

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