Poem -
A Fruitful Change
Storms beat like a restless drum
Forcing leaves on fragile stems to bend
Send our feathered friends-
To fear the worst when gales impend
To reel and deal a force of steel
Which hurls
Whirls with fridged feel
Its harsh
Unforgiving bite
The final stance of winters plight
Before its sudden bid adieu
As Spring leaps in to spell anew
Its sprtiely enigmatic charm
Its tender touch
Can do no harm
Beguiling nature to its grace
A fruitful loving warm embrace
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Comments
Hi Gwendoline,
This is a beautifully crafted piece about the changing seasons. Great rhyming and beautiful imagery.
- Syd
Many thanks Syd
I do find solace in nature. So grateful for the read and feedback
Gwen x
Nature rules.
Absolutely 🥰 thank you for reading and leaving your words
Gwen x
wonderful poem
Thank you so much lovely 💓
Beautifully hopeful and written in a fabulous flow of loveliness Gwen...thanks for sharing this lovely piece of work xx
Thank you lovely 😊 am trying to squeeze something nice out of myself. So glad you liked it. I do love nature x
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Thanks lovely 💗🌷
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I had that pic first! lol! wonderful write Gwen!................................Jim
Oops hehe, well Jim you clearly have beautiful taste :)
Many thanks for reading and leaving me your words. They are always truly welcome 🙏 x
Such a fast and engaging read. Felt the cold wind in this one Gwen. I especially enjoyed your ryhmeing scheme, which is becoming a signature of your work. Just decided to check in a see what other poems you had on offer! Your friend Max
Wow thanks Max for dropping by and reading an older post :) it is always so lovely to read your thoughts on my poems. Thank you for your perceptive thoughts on my structure and writing habits. I hadn’t realised myself, but yes I do seem to be forming a style. I hope you are keeping well my friend :)