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A Good Deed!

A Good Deed!

I like to seek and find the light
one of a kind thats shining bright
Down to earth from day to night
ever since birth im up for a fight

now im striking those demons lerking
killing them with words im sharing
flirting with death is it all worth it
i always win so i cant compare it

i was trained by those who teach good
out brain the bad an leave them in blood
on gods side i ride so i should
defeat the demon before it comes out the bud

there all good deeds that i commit
demons heads gets smashed of the bonnet
yes im on it living the righteous life
out hunting the evil that stands in sight
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Dean Kuch

"...now im striking those demons [lerking] lurking..." Check your spelling of "lurking", James.
I wonder why you choose not to capitalize any of the "I's" in this? Some sort of poetic license to highlight your insignificance in the grand scheme of things?
Just curious...
Emotive writing.
Keep fighting the good fight.
~Dean

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