Poem -

A Life Lived Sadly

with so many variants lately, here's one I made earlier ...

A Life Lived Sadly

There was never really
that much to say
about his life at all ..
In fact, they managed
to say just about everything
in seventeen syllables 
and three lines, well placed ..

 

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Being Me

His life summed up in a haiku eh?  Surely more worthy than a haiku lol.  I absolutely love this clever piece x

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author
Neville

sorry for my late reply Tina but I sincerely thank you for your very kind comment & for your ongoing support .. both mean an awful lot to this old fella ... x

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