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Tony Taylor

The first seven lines had me...... Then......I was lost in my selfishness and thoroughly thrown for a loop on the final line.......I Love it when I don't quite understand the author's intent!!.......ALL STARS!!....thanx for the ride WAYNE!!..... keep throwing them at us brother..... I'll come back to this one with fresh eyes later!!..... Peace n Stuff!!.......T xo ❤?

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Wayne Stubbs

Thanks very much Tony haha ☮? brother! ????

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