A MOMENT IN TIME
A moment in time that is all it took
we met i kissed him, the earth shook
It has been awhile since i let walls down
but he has made me smile for now, no frown
I hope as time passes we both find that spark
bringing us closer, and maybe love could start
I really like him but i don`t know why we click
i like he`s respectful, and he says i`m a one off chick
Its so funny because hes not my usual, type of man
there again passed experience with types, i`ve ran
So as our first proper date nears, i`m nervous as hell
we have talked lots though, so surely the nerves will quell
I think ill be alright i can flirt with the best of them
so i was told in the passed, or else ill be struck dumb :-)
ill just use womanly charms! wait have i got them still?
if not it will be him one, and little ole me nil
For the first time in years i am going to take a chance
i think i deserve some happiness, in the case of romance
It only took one smile one kiss, and a come to me look
just a moment in time when for me, the earth shook
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How romantic. My guess, you've still got it kid.
Aww Thanks Kimmy i hope i have lol
Thanks for reading and commenting
Best wishes Debs
Hey DEBS!!....I agree with KIMMY!!.....having read some of your poetry my guess is...... It'll be fun regardless...... and you can follow your heart with the foundation of experience to back you up......VERY romantic stuff girlfriend...... looking forward to another cool write..... revealing more romantic results (smiles)....... Love it!!....... smiles & high fives.......T xo?
Hi Tony Although i`m a bit nervous i`m sure
ill be ok after awhile just a long time since i went on a date
I must like him lol
Thank you my friend for the encouragement and comments
means a lot Love n hugs Debs xo
so beautiful Debs!
Hi Lisa Poetess So glad you liked this one
Thank you for commenting
Best wishes Debs
Hi Debs....it's cool to know you're going to take a chance....of course you still got the womanly charm.....sure you really deserve some happiness...prays this works for you. Enjoyed every bit of this. Nicely phrased andf rhymed...
Lots of love.....Rose
Hi Dear Rose Awww Thank you for
your sweet words glad you enjoyed
Lots of love Debs
awe this is so pretty, nice work deb
Hi Amber Thank you for stopping by
and for your kind words
Best wishes Debs
Hi, great write her, flowed lovely and portrayed mixed emotions.
cheers jeff
Hi Jeff Thanks for your comments i appreciate you
stopping by
Best wishes Debs
Hi Dear Debs,
We of your Cosmo family are all hoping that this "Moment In Time" becomes an eternity of endlessness. May the tremors under your feet never end. May those smiles and kisses last forever. May your souls be bonded for all time.
Hugs, Peace and Love,
xox Larry
P.S. You go girl! Keep us posted! (Linda)
Hi Dear Larry always look forward to your lovely
comments a pleasure to read Thank you
love n hugs Debs
Will do Linda :-) xox