Poem -
A Poem About Hate
This whole poem is all about hate
Like I hate to say goodbye
Or I hate the fact I'm not with you
Every moment, you and I
I hate it when other men look at you
Hate to have to share you at all
I'd like to lock you up in some dark room
In a castle with ten foot walls
Think I'm greedy well maybe I am
Hate to admit it but it's true
Want you all to myself all the time
You're on my mind all day through
Hate it when other guys look at you
You're mine and all mine alone
Go ogle some other guy's woman
My hatred is very well known
The hate that I feel is caused by love
Don't ever want to say goodbye
This burning love is so overwhelming
My love/hate just intensifies
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This is superb my Jack. You clearly show how those two emotions confuse us all so easily and are a huge learning curve for the young. Hate is a harsh word but it is the opposite of love and there is only a hairs breadth between those two intense feelings and it is hard to cope with either of them, especially when those feelings are misconstrued or misunderstood or the person you love doesn`t feel the same way.
I love the way you have written this one sweetie.
I think you and I should find a secret hide away and not tell a soul where we are so we can forget about the world. Ooh!!.... gosh!! the thought of cuddling up to my Jack in front of an open fire....pure heaven my darling!!!
I love you sweetie
G xx
From you and Cherie... the love literally flows straight to my heart! You guys are so special in my life! "A hiding place"!!! You tell me where and when and this old duffer will be there! YEE HAW! You are such a love, I am blessed to know you... hugs, Jack xxx
Hi Jack I think a tiny bit of jealousy is fine
but when its an obsessive jealousy that`s
when problems can start. as Cherie and Georgina
say such a fine line between love and hate
i like how you have written this Jack
Great job love n hugs Debs xx
Dear Debs! Between you, Cherie and Georgina, the love literally flows straight to my heart! What a lucky fellow I am!!! Love and hugs, Jack xxx