Poem -
A Poetic Mind.
Hi there, Iโm a poet,
And welcome to my brain,
Itโs a little bit fucked up in here,
Some say that Iโm insane.
My idealism may scare you,
Or leave you in a bind,
But when it comes to writing,
Iโm a lyrical mastermind.
My thoughts will give you nightmares,
So think twice before you read,
For my view of reality,
Is where creativity is freed.
You cannot cage my concepts,
Nor imprison my reflection,
For I use words like bullets,
To change your preconception.
My crazy is infectious,
And my rhythm is on point,
So come visit my perception
As I will not disappoint.ย
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Hi Lucy, you don't disappoint. I could relate in many ways to this poem.
Nicely written - Syd xoย
Hey Syd! Thank you ??ย
Lucy, Never read your work before...I just love this piece if poetry... God bless..
Hi Terry, thank you for visiting โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
Hey Sister Girl!!...... "I'm a lyrical mastermind.."..... is a VERY cool way to describe this write.... for it DOES indeed deliver the perfect rhythm and timing required of a lyricist!!....... my favorite though ~
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ~ "For I use words like bullets
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย To changes your preconception"
How I love the confidence..... the sheer bluntness...... the matter of fastness of ~
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ~ "For my view of reality
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย Is where creativity is freed"
You go girl!!.... Work it!! ~ Own it!! ~ Work it!!......ALL STARS!!
Very cool stuff LUCY!!..... I love the madness!!.......lots of love to you and yours!!.....T xo ??โด?โค
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Awww thank you Tony ?โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
lovely as always:) where's the fun without a little crazy. you are a passionate writer whether its freestyle or rhyme passionate is my preferred choice in readingย
Hey Sarah, thank you and I completely agree, passionate shines the best โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
Simply gorgeous writing
Thank you Joe! โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
Lucy
I relate!ย My thoughts and words are fucked up also.ย Thanks For Sharing
Greg
Thank you Greg โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
Believe you summed up the poetry thought process in your opening stanza.
Great rhyme scheme and meter throughout and flows smoothly.
Can see it's been a while since you been on here, but suffice to say many thanks and I hope this comment finds you and finds you well.