Poem -
A Prayer For None
Entrenched on a bench
Weeping willow cries my tears
Alone in absolute silence
Feeling the hurt of the years
Soul is breaking apart
Darkness is creeping in
Blocking out all the light
Never free from sin
Tormenting memories
Haunt my dreams
Trying to figure out
What they really mean
Saying a prayer for none
Hoping for a sunny day
Stuck in this moment
Tarnished ,battered with not much less to say
Living life day to day
Twisted etching in the brain
Someday soon it will all fade away
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Strong write emphasising how life can be difficult and challenging.
Great worthy piece.
Hug. :)
Hey Richard thanks , just thoughts on this moment in time. Every poem I write is what I'm feeling then not all the time . Have a great weekend. Rock
You are using your emotional state at the time you write to create wonderful work. You have much to say and you say it clearly.
Hoping you get all you want from life. Hug.
Thanks for being there. :)
Rock, Coming from a heart that has felt all this pain from her pass knows that until you can really just put it behind you and grow from it and never forget how wonderful it was and learn from what was not good you will never start a real healing process . Trust me I can realate to most of your pain and no its so so not easy to do that . All I can tell you is once you do it gives the heart such peace inside again and it really open your heart for the love you want and it won't be such a challenge for you because you will want to let it back in . I will keep praying for you and pray you do find that kind of love again . :)
Hey loving heart you can pray but I'm just figuring things out one day at a time . Just my thoughts on this day is all . Have a great weekend, rock
Ho Rock strong imagery feel the pain well written x
Hey Wendy thanks, I wanted to write a different poem with 3 or 4 lines writes. Perfecting my talent . There is always room for improvement in my world. Glad you enjoyed, rock
My Dear Brother Poet Rock,
A prayer for you. May the tears that you cry in abject loneliness, convert to the penultimate tears of joy. May the tormented memories change to your dreams fulfilled. May the sun shine on you forever, and bestow upon you, a new reason for your longevity.
Peace and Love,
xox Larry
Thank you Larry , sorry I missed your comment! Hope you are doing well , rock :)